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Mortician on the Edge by Savannah
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Mortician on the Edge

~ Savannah ~

Break away from loneliness,
Tear yourself from it's cold grasp.
Break away from loneliness,
Live today as it's your last.

Break away from heartache,
Alone, you can proceed.
Break away from heartache,
Yourself is all you need.

Break away from blindness,
There's a grave right at your feet.
Break away from blindness,
Or you'll ride in the backseat.

Break away from selfishness,
There are others far, far worse.
Break away from selfishness,
Some don't choose to take that hearse.

Copyright 2005 Savannah
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  • Riven Waker On Wednesday, June 10, 2009, Riven Waker (324) wrote:

    much wisdom delivered with a strong rythmic pulse - very well done

  • Spiral Downward On Sunday, December 23, 2007, Spiral Downward (406) wrote:

    This would make a great song, at least it reads that way! Inventive but not irritating, concise yet dynamic!

  • AniDayz On Friday, May 6, 2005, AniDayz (1051) wrote:

    raining...down on me...pouring...onto my skin....this is absoltuely resonating with me tongiht+i thank you

  • Savannah On Friday, April 28, 2006, Savannah (278) wrote:

    you are very welcome

  • blue On Friday, May 6, 2005, blue (1605) wrote:

    Damn, there is no other day that I should have read this...You've no idea. Thank you. ~b


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