Color of Death

Yellow, through my window shines,
Sunlight should be grey.
No color in this world of mine,
No sunshine lights my day.

Storm Clouds should be overhead,
Dark as night outside,
I'm dead atop an unmade bed,
And here I will reside.

Red, was once a flowing stream,
Now, brown has caked my skin.
A picture from a coroner's dream,
The unforgiven sin.

Black and white are shaking hands,
And mixing into grey.
The color, on my body, lands,
It's the color of decay.

• On Friday, March 28, 2008, Moonflower (431) wrote:
  
  i love this ryhme scheme. it felt light but it was really melancholy..i like this.
  
  
• On Wednesday, April 25, 2007, Spiral Downward (406) wrote:
  
  I like this alot, simple but it works well with the theme. Great Write!
  
  
• A former member wrote: ... damn... bravo
  
  
• On Friday, February 18, 2005, sexually_sadistic (422) wrote:
  
  such a vivid and intense piece. the imagery takes the mind on a deep captivating journey. your talent is enchanting my dear. glad to see you posting! ~sex~
  
  
• On Thursday, February 17, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1056) wrote:
  
  wow, this is awesome, i love the images filling my head while i read this, hehe....and a truely great flow
  
  
• On Thursday, February 17, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (496) wrote:
  
  good flow.....not just good flow very good flow, perfect if I may be so bold
  
  
• On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, lordshadow (156) wrote:
  
  Savannah, I'm sorry it's been so long since I've read something from you, but I'm glad I found this... definitely a favorite.
  
  
• On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, sIo (793) wrote:
  
  i do agree. this rocked in the most diturbing way.
  
  
• On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, TheLastDragon (60) wrote:
  
  That's a somewhat disgusting mental picture, but well-written nonetheless.
  
  
• On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, Savannah (278) wrote:
  
  Why, thank you! I try my best to be as disturbing and disgusting as possible.