Prove It by Savannah ~ Dark Poetry

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On Wednesday, October 26, 2005, blue (1605) wrote:

:) ahhh... the reliability of others. ;) loved the hearts and your handwriting is really nice. The ashtray to me adds a whole new dimension to this. Great job love :) ~b
A former member wrote: very amazing....I loved it
On Wednesday, March 16, 2005, Saint_Reaper (261) wrote:

holy shit, this gave me the goose bumbs... i like it ~saint~
On Wednesday, January 19, 2005, Soulfire (110) wrote:

*chills* very good
On Monday, January 17, 2005, stormtalk (818) wrote:

Hahaha! I'm not sure if this was meant to be funny, but the ending cracked me up. It's nice to finally read a suicide poem with a sense of humor, not just some mindless droning about how life sucks and then you die (or kill yourself).
On Friday, January 7, 2005, Rone4611 (147) wrote:

cigs - $15.00, Brown paper - $5.00, moving poetry... priceless
On Wednesday, January 5, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1056) wrote:

i enjoyed this greatly, very creative.
On Saturday, January 1, 2005, SamoneDrone (348) wrote:

nice handwritting
On Friday, December 31, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (498) wrote:

i liked the ending, as well as the repetition and certain lines in every stanza. . the color of the paper and the cigs add plenty to this, its rustic. . and beautiful handwriting as well.. nice piece
On Tuesday, December 28, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1550) wrote:

... I like it
On Monday, December 27, 2004, Kitt (31) wrote:

spifilicious. pretty handwriting as well. :) [kitt]
On Monday, December 27, 2004, DarkWolf (419) wrote:

How twisted and wonderful. "Kill me if you love me" I love the sentiment. Touching in a Dark way. :) -Michael
A former member wrote: aw this is greeaatt. the presentation was good, though I would have liked it plain too. Great work.
On Sunday, December 26, 2004, OLd SouL (763) wrote:

presentation really added alot to this.. I thoroughly enjoyed it until the last verse. Excellent job. :::OLd
A former member wrote: awesome
On Sunday, December 26, 2004, K_Love (596) wrote:

The discolored like paper and the cigg butts add something to this. Very beautiful, I'm amazed. The hand writing is lovely also :)
A former member wrote: wow, "intense" doesnt even say it, im speachless...nice work.
On Sunday, December 26, 2004, sexually_sadistic (422) wrote:

this is wailing with sadness. so painful to read. i dont exactlly know what you are going through but if you ever need to talk im only an email away. this piece speaks deeply to me. i have traveled this path to many times and i cant exactly say that i eve
On Sunday, December 26, 2004, sexually_sadistic (422) wrote:

i ever found my way home. but i do lend my hand dear child, we can walk together on our way! ~sex~
On Saturday, December 25, 2004, AniDayz (1051) wrote:

sorry if im reading more into this than you had wanted...]

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~ Savannah ~

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