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On Wednesday October 26th, 2005, blue (1737) writes:

:) ahhh... the reliability of others. ;) loved the hearts and your handwriting is really nice. The ashtray to me adds a whole new dimension to this. Great job love :) ~b

On Wednesday September 28th, 2005, An Expired Member (2) writes:

very amazing....I loved it

On Wednesday March 16th, 2005, Saint_Reaper (285) writes:

holy shit, this gave me the goose bumbs... i like it ~saint~

On Wednesday January 19th, 2005, Soulfire (116) writes:

*chills* very good

On Monday January 17th, 2005, stormtalk (907) writes:

Hahaha! I'm not sure if this was meant to be funny, but the ending cracked me up. It's nice to finally read a suicide poem with a sense of humor, not just some mindless droning about how life sucks and then you die (or kill yourself).

On Friday January 7th, 2005, Rone4611 (156) writes:

cigs - $15.00, Brown paper - $5.00, moving poetry... priceless

On Wednesday January 5th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1241) writes:

i enjoyed this greatly, very creative.

On Saturday January 1st, 2005, SamoneDrone (406) writes:

nice handwritting

On Friday December 31st, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:

i liked the ending, as well as the repetition and certain lines in every stanza. . the color of the paper and the cigs add plenty to this, its rustic. . and beautiful handwriting as well.. nice piece

On Tuesday December 28th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1793) writes:

... I like it

On Monday December 27th, 2004, Kitt (33) writes:

spifilicious. pretty handwriting as well. :) [kitt]

On Monday December 27th, 2004, DarkWolf (446) writes:

How twisted and wonderful. "Kill me if you love me" I love the sentiment. Touching in a Dark way. :) -Michael

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, An Expired Member (15) writes:

aw this is greeaatt. the presentation was good, though I would have liked it plain too. Great work.

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, OLd SouL (837) writes:

presentation really added alot to this.. I thoroughly enjoyed it until the last verse. Excellent job. :::OLd

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, frozen (746) writes:

awesome

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, K_Love (687) writes:

The discolored like paper and the cigg butts add something to this. Very beautiful, I'm amazed. The hand writing is lovely also :)

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, An Expired Member (8) writes:

wow, "intense" doesnt even say it, im speachless...nice work.

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (496) writes:

this is wailing with sadness. so painful to read. i dont exactlly know what you are going through but if you ever need to talk im only an email away. this piece speaks deeply to me. i have traveled this path to many times and i cant exactly say that i eve

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (496) writes:

i ever found my way home. but i do lend my hand dear child, we can walk together on our way! ~sex~

On Saturday December 25th, 2004, AniDayz (1267) writes:

sorry if im reading more into this than you had wanted...]

On Saturday December 25th, 2004, AniDayz (1267) writes:

yowwww...hold up there sweetheart... 'if you want something done right, you have to do it yourself...'---LOVE YOURSELF man...thats alls you gotta do right.... this jerks some tears inside of me,a feeling i know, but its not the way its got to be...[

On Saturday December 25th, 2004, sIo (875) writes:

this was fucked up and awesome in itself. i love it

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