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((((Phobia))))

Scared of the light

Scared of the moon

Stay in the dark

Stay in my room

Scared of my house

Scared of outside

Can't talk right now

I have to go hide

Scared of black

Scared of white

Scared of the day

Scared of the night

Scared of myself

I'm so scared of you

I'm scared to be here

Yet too scared to move

Leave me alone

Wait, please don't go

I might just freak out

Might lose all control

Scared of the drugs

I take to get by

Scared if I don't

I may not survive

Too scared to live

Too scared to die

Scared to get better

Too scared to try..

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On Monday April 18th, 2005, FlashDark (25) writes:

great structure in the poem without a hint of awkwardness very nice

On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, Sanctuary (84) writes:

your fear and your sadness. I applaud your courage to lay opern your soul to all of us

On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, Sanctuary (84) writes:

This is the 2nd poem I have reviewed by you, thought I have read many. But I have to say, that I would be hard pressed to find another person I have read, that sums up her fears so openly, and honestly. I have never met you, but I feel your frustration,

On Thursday December 2nd, 2004, stuart_pid (217) writes:

this poem rocks. the whole thing was awesome but the last two stanzas are the ones that stick out to me.

On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, suicideseason (2145) writes:

This ripped through me.

On Sunday November 28th, 2004, An Expired Member (12) writes:

omg i love this one! it is so amazing i love the lines "Too scared to live Too scared to die Scared to get better Too scared to try.." i dont know why i just do. great job!

On Monday December 6th, 2004, Liz (407) writes:

Too scared to try? Is what's working against you?

On Friday November 26th, 2004, ~SHeLL*BeLL~ (72) writes:

i love this one!

On Thursday November 25th, 2004, sIo (892) writes:

nice

On Thursday November 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (61) writes:

AWESOME!!! i loved this poem. good job!

On Thursday November 25th, 2004, lost_moody_soul (34) writes:

AMAZING! very nice work! i loved it..my favorite part is "Scared of black Scared of white Scared of the day Scared of the night" ...Very nice use of contrast:)

On Thursday November 25th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (586) writes:

wow, excellent work..

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