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A pale faced beauty turns around,
She picks up on the rhythmic sound,
Of dinner's footsteps on the ground,
With unsuspecting ease.

A cloak as black as darkness gets,
Her fangs are sharp, her lips are wet,
Ready to pounce, her target's set,
Through starving eyes, she sees.

He walks alone, so unaware,
Of the danger that is lying there,
Her evil presence in the air,
The hunger, she must please.

What succor she will finally taste,
His struggling heart will start to race,
And splash more blood onto her face,
She'll send him to his knees.

Movements silent in the dark,
She tracks her victim's pulsing heart,
She begins tear his flesh apart,
And feed among the trees.

She drops the body at her feet,
His struggling heart no longer beats,
Into the dark, she must retreat,
Before the darkness leaves.






With help from Sleepwalker - thanks,babe



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On Friday May 6th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (765) writes:
Wow. Such an amazing write. I felt like I was right there. It definately painted a picture for me. Great write ~*~Tart~*~


On Thursday November 11th, 2004, purr_verse (1435) writes:
Nice horror, nice cadence! Beautiful slice of darkness.


On Wednesday September 29th, 2004, DarkWolf (447) writes:
Wicked and Dark.. I so love this one. Powerful imagery.. "Through starving eyes, she sees" what a fantastic line. Favoring this one. -michael


On Wednesday September 29th, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:
oh wow, this was beautiful...dont know what else to say. most enjoyable read.~~~Grave


On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, MelvinOliverDrauma (552) writes:
Panther? or something else, it really doesn't matter your rhyming verse was close to perfect and the poem itself was as beautiful as I've seen in a long time


On Thursday September 2nd, 2004, Savannah (290) writes:
Vampire - Thanks for the comment!


On Wednesday August 25th, 2004, lordshadow (213) writes:
Just wanted you to know that so far... you are my favorite. Don't know what, if anything that means to you, but it's true. Please don't stop writing.


On Saturday August 21st, 2004, mysticventures (546) writes:
yes!!! vividly real to me! was that my heart you took?


On Friday August 20th, 2004, Zophiel (349) writes:
I bet this would be damn good put to the right music.


On Friday August 20th, 2004, Soulseeker (120) writes:
Vivid and has a good writing scheme!! Bethany



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