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Annah Rae by Savannah
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Annah Rae

~ Savannah ~

You are my sun that shines upon me,
When I have a cloudy day.
You are my shooting star I wish on,
When I wish the world away.

You are my butterflies in January,
A stunning, gorgeous sight.
Bright color on my dull background,
A miracle in flight.

When all that is, is misery,
You somehow cause a spark.
Which turns into my flame of hope,
To guide me through the dark.

You are the reason for the breath I take,
Why I wake up every day.
You are my heart, my soul, my everything.
My precious Annah Rae.


I wrote this for my 3 year old daughter, and she is everything that I said, and more.

Copyright 2004 Savannah
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  • DarkWolf On Saturday, October 2, 2004, DarkWolf (418) wrote:

    ..Brought tears to my eyes this one did.. I can completely relate to this piece with my own children.. very well done, excellent write. -Michael

  • Graveyard_Desciple On Friday, June 4, 2004, Graveyard_Desciple (41) wrote:

    Beautiful. I'm glad you have someone that is so precious that she just makes you whole again. These people, these keys of completion are extremely valuable and a necessity for living. great write.

  • cre On Friday, June 4, 2004, cre (451) wrote:

    beautiful, and well written . . extremely touching piece.

  • cre On Friday, June 4, 2004, cre (451) wrote:

    oh, i forgot to say, i love the name annah rae .. it's lovely!

  • Savannah On Friday, June 4, 2004, Savannah (276) wrote:

    Her real name is Savannah Rae.

  • Endifference On Friday, June 4, 2004, Endifference (201) wrote:

    Great dedication, and the pacing is near perfect. -END-

  • Cinn On Friday, June 4, 2004, Cinn (173) wrote:

    this is so sweet, lucky little girl to have such a loving momma

  • A former member wrote: well this is why...thos sayings is so true 'heaven is beneath mothers feats..'...repect and much love


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