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Home Sweet Home by Savannah
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Home Sweet Home

~ Savannah ~

I close my eyes and daydream
of a place that's far from here.
A place that's filled with beauty.
This place contains no fear.

The people are accepting.
They do not stop and stare.
They do not mind the way you dress
or the colors of your hair.

Everyone is different
yet everyone's the same.
The streets are filled with smiling faces.
No one calles you names.

My daughter can grow up here
and never have to care
whether she fits in or not
or what she's going to wear.

No one will be mean to her
the way people treated me.
She never will be ridiculed
for all the world to see.

She will never feel the pain I felt.
She will never have to cry.
If we could only stay here
in this place behind my eyes.

Copyright 2004 Savannah
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  • Spiral Downward On Friday, May 18, 2007, Spiral Downward (406) wrote:

    Lovely Sentiment! The Rhyme Did Not Destroy The Message That Was Pure And Beautiful Here! Amazing Write! \Billy/

  • Kinkypoptart On Sunday, May 1, 2005, Kinkypoptart (663) wrote:

    Sounds like perfection. Very impossible, but atleast you can imagine. Great write ~*~Tart~*~

  • Clerik On Wednesday, December 22, 2004, Clerik (41) wrote:

    If only we could unify a place so real...but that's a long way off.

  • lost_moody_soul On Thursday, November 25, 2004, lost_moody_soul (34) wrote:

    If this place truely existed my future children would have a nice life.. very nice work!

  • sexually_sadistic On Thursday, November 4, 2004, sexually_sadistic (422) wrote:

    i have been lost in this place many times. great work!!! ~sex~

  • DarkWolf On Saturday, October 2, 2004, DarkWolf (419) wrote:

    If you find a way to this place.. take us with you.. our children could play together. It sounds of perfection.. -Michael

  • missanthropic On Saturday, May 22, 2004, missanthropic (45) wrote:

    what hope for the little ones that follow us...i wish i was there too...

  • Midnight Shadow On Saturday, May 22, 2004, Midnight Shadow (72) wrote:

    Hey! I wish this place were real, I want to go there. Sounds just like paradise to me. The images in my mind were beautiful. ~MS~


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