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Just Like Me by Savannah
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Just Like Me

~ Savannah ~

Tell me all your secrets
Tell me all your dreams
Tell me all your nightmares
I'll tell you what they mean

Indulge in conversation
with a person who may hear
and understand the complex
of what blackened souls do fear

I know about the heartache
I know about the rages
I understand that letter
that you wrote on tearstained pages

You think that you are different
You think you are insane
You think that there is no one
who can understand your pain

Well empty out your mind of thoughts
no matter what they be
I swear I'll understand you
because you're just like me.

Copyright 2004 Savannah
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  • A former member wrote: you don't have to swear, i feel like you already understand me

  • Spiral Downward On Thursday, August 14, 2008, Spiral Downward (407) wrote:

    I love the way you simplified this, made it easy to follow. I like the balance of light and shade here. The casualness of promise against a melancholy backdrop

  • A former member wrote: Thank you. You have just inspired another poem...

  • AngelicDemonMelisandre On Monday, May 30, 2005, AngelicDemonMelisandre (22) wrote:

    Wow. Great poem. I've felt the same before about certain people, when you're trying to make them understand that whatever you say you'll understand.

  • etarnally damnd On Monday, May 30, 2005, etarnally damnd (82) wrote:

    this is a great poem-michael

  • LovelyAssassinx On Monday, May 30, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (188) wrote:

    This was absolutely wonderful. Great write. ~Unlucky

  • A former member wrote: Wow, very nice

  • Silent Assassin On Thursday, December 16, 2004, Silent Assassin (114) wrote:

    Amazingly done. Flow was incredible. Very well writen.

  • A former member wrote: I agree with all the below; unquestionably great.

  • island warrior On Sunday, December 5, 2004, island warrior (267) wrote:

    I like the way this flows.

  • WhoIAM On Saturday, December 4, 2004, WhoIAM (31) wrote:

    Very nice work. Great poem

  • blue On Sunday, November 28, 2004, blue (1606) wrote:

    empathy is a most cherished friend! beautiful work! b

  • A former member wrote: i like this! nice work

  • JiNx On Monday, November 15, 2004, JiNx (123) wrote:

    Wonderful and awesome poem... Does that mean you understand me? -JiNx(ie)

  • Savannah On Tuesday, November 16, 2004, Savannah (278) wrote:

    I am a very understanding person.. so, it's likely :)

  • intotheclouds On Monday, November 8, 2004, intotheclouds (20) wrote:

    yes! this is wonderful... I know the one who understands me... the thing is, she hates me. Anywayz... Ty|3r #@|3

  • A former member wrote: this work is very open, and very true. extremely true. theres always somebody who can understand you, you just need to find somebody. lovely piece

  • DarkWolf On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, DarkWolf (419) wrote:

    Well done indeed. This one is so open and honest. -Michael

  • Markus Porkwing On Friday, September 3, 2004, Markus Porkwing (594) wrote:

    It's always nice to meet someone that can understand your person. Great write.

  • OLd SouL On Saturday, May 22, 2004, OLd SouL (763) wrote:

    'I understand that letter that you wrote on tearstained pages' Awesome lines. Your style is intelligent and well appreciated. :::OLd


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