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It’s like a tomb in here,
Waiting on your affection,
You’re love,
I’m swollen
With hope and incisions
Your knife like words do that to me.

You give so much

So…
Much


Affection.
You are Per[in]fection

And I bled myself into you,
You filled my bones with the molten fire that eats away at me.

Kiss me
Pressure sealed, plastic wrapped.
I am [your] perfection.

[your mold]

‘Cause I always know
What you can’t live without.

I’m just [not] what you always thought
But so meek

[You know I’d do anything for you]


And I can never say no…
Heaven forbid,
No.


I can smile through anything
[I Hope]
I know I have to learn
In your perfection,
That everyone sees

[That I see through]

Because I know,
That as much as I hate to love you

[and how I hate you sometimes]

Hole in the wall hell
And accusatory screams.
I know,
What I have to do,
[It’ll be worth it, someday…|I hope|]
To make you happy…




[Tomakeyouloveme.]






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On Thursday February 1st, 2007, Lord Kalgalath (229) writes:
seems more poignant everytime i reread this... bittersweet somewhate hollow victory in the end. And its still just dust


On Friday January 26th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:
this was perfect


On Wednesday January 17th, 2007, carlosjackal (1717) writes:
I loved the title and the obsession expressed within this piece, in its form and language. Excellent. I hope you return soon with some fresh writes.


On Wednesday December 27th, 2006, K_Love (688) writes:
Gawd, Kya. This floored me. Imagery placed so perfectly between lovely heartbreaking words. I felt this one shake my bones, lovely write. ILY!


On Tuesday December 12th, 2006, girlafraid (579) writes:
This brought me back to a place i thought i'd never revisit. It's so stark and expository. I hope it is worth it, for you.


On Thursday December 7th, 2006, Lynaes (1125) writes:
"It’s like a tomb in here, Waiting on your affection" I have known that feelin, I just wish you could never have written about it Kya-babe..


On Thursday December 7th, 2006, Lynaes (1125) writes:
But on saying that, you are the epitome of those rare times when pain is beautiful. So emotionally charged.. You're gorgeous.


On Monday December 4th, 2006, dying angel (1328) writes:
grrr. i hate that feeling of losing control when it comes to that person. and not being able to say no. yes, i can relate. this was so hopeful.


On Monday December 4th, 2006, BeautifullyRuined (145) writes:
Its seems that we all go through life trying to make people love us.You explained it beautifully.*Elana*


On Sunday December 3rd, 2006, blue (1740) writes:
Raindear! =)


On Sunday December 3rd, 2006, Kin Hebi (95) writes:
this is absolutely amazing. Just wonderfull nicely done.


On Sunday December 3rd, 2006, sIo (884) writes:
this is beyond perfection and power. this is straight up masterful work. amazing job. i'm very impressed.


On Sunday December 3rd, 2006, Lord Kalgalath (229) writes:
hmmm If you knew how much these words make me think of women I have killed myself trying to make notice me in the past... good job.



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