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"Faded/Beautiful." by Rain In The Willows

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Today I found a picture
Of what we used to be
Us
Before we even knew the bond we shared
In your eyes Iw as reflected as a child
Begging for ice cream again
And you led me back
To a place
Where I loved who I was again

I laid there that day
Waiting for my chest to collapse
From the featherweight of the sheets
And the leaden look in your eyes

And I want to breathe
I want you to know
I'm still beautiful
I'm still fragmented/crazy
Torn
But I'm beautiful.

You left me in sympathy
I've never really had [anything but] pride,
So please,
Don't stare
As I leave in the tattered sheets
You left me in

Your eyes still amaze me
But with a hollowness too much like my own

If god loves me
He'll let me go

I'm translucent/pale
Blackened/scarred/bleeding
But still beautiful

Always

Beautiful

Take your eyes away from me,
Rip my heart out with them
(you know you will)



Perhaps it's easier in life, that way...



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On Wednesday December 26th, 2007, italianbella (295) writes:
any word i might offer would not do this poem justice so ill just say "thank you for sharing" :)


On Tuesday September 19th, 2006, Bluegirl (248) writes:
Much heart-felt sentiment, and beautiful imagery. Ah! Lovely..


On Friday July 21st, 2006, K_Love (691) writes:
So beautiful, Kya. I meant to comment this a long time ago but I could never find the words. I'm floored and drooling, give me more.


On Friday September 23rd, 2005, blue (1749) writes:
*chyus* it is precisely these failings that give rise to want and need.. oh, if we could somehow free ourselves from the madness the world might be a bit brighter, a comfort as of yet unknown. ~b


On Friday September 23rd, 2005, StAinedNblood (43) writes:
This is an amazing poem I could just paint a picture in my mind with this. Excellent job!


On Friday September 23rd, 2005, Yesterday (27) writes:
This gives me chills, but yet it gives me a sense of peace. Indeed you are beautiful, on the inside and the out.


On Thursday September 22nd, 2005, evolve (2228) writes:
You've a tender sort of heartbreak..so delicate and mild-mannered, but you never miss a beat..xoxo.


On Thursday September 22nd, 2005, evolve (2228) writes:
..you enchant me..and this both lifted my heart and buried a pang in it deeper..still, your evocative nature astounds.


On Friday September 30th, 2005, Serenity (600) writes:
I second her comment. Delicate and tender.


On Thursday September 22nd, 2005, TwilightMelodies (1072) writes:
*Sighs* Oh man...I think I just shattered upon the concrete floor of your words...this is amazing...Wonderful job! *Evangel*



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