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Let me see you stripped down
To the bone
Devoid of all pretense
Pretext
Of fear
Of loathing

Let me see
The shine in your eyes
The smile you so desprately hide.

I want to hear
What you really feel
That you believe
In what?

I want to feel the skies under our feet
The stars in our grasp
Your breath on my cheek.
I want to know all...

So show me everything...


*for my Mac and Cheese Angel.


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On Friday September 19th, 2008, MishiMuffin (26) writes:
and basically the whole thing... it was LOVELY!!!


On Friday September 19th, 2008, MishiMuffin (26) writes:
i love the shining eyes part :D


On Saturday December 3rd, 2005, Lord Kalgalath (227) writes:
mmm reminds me of a song by Rammstien... Excellent work.


On Friday May 27th, 2005, blue (1701) writes:
:)Lovely lovely Raindear.. beautiful words for a most beautiful dove. :) ~b


On Friday May 27th, 2005, Ravenblade (273) writes:
this was an amazing piece, especially since I'm not the biggest fan of shorter writes, but this was great...Good to see you writing again...and I'm thinking that I need to talk to you more, I miss talking to you...great write>Raven


On Thursday May 26th, 2005, Doc (180) writes:
Very nice, but cheese angel?


On Thursday May 26th, 2005, Lab Rat (296) writes:
i love dm.... and this is good too


On Thursday May 26th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (263) writes:
Oh my love. My beautiful love. "Your breath on my cheek..." Eee, that line made me giddy. Such a sweet and softly spoken happiness you have brought me. I love you, pretty.


On Thursday May 26th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (263) writes:
*faves once upgraded. :P


On Thursday May 26th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (821) writes:
I love you too:D


On Thursday May 26th, 2005, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:
oohh..i like...i agree w/ Midnight Seraphim..great write! :) -Kel


On Thursday May 26th, 2005, Serenity (578) writes:
::nods:: I second this. Awesome!


On Thursday May 26th, 2005, Astra Dei (632) writes:
Its like your pleading for them to let you in.. very nice write


On Thursday May 26th, 2005, Sin (1622) writes:
its such a sweet surrender when we break down our barriers and share ourselves completely..this was beautiful both in imagery and wording...i adore this..and you ~kristy



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