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"Those Days You Swung So Hard...A Post for Angelvoice" by Rain In The Willows

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**Thanks for the title Amy hon...This is for you.

I walked the streets tonight.
Tracing bro.ken sidewalk [memories]
In bare feet and broken glass
Telling the stories of our lives
In [sc.arred] feet and dirty faces.

At night we fell asleep to a .s c r e a m i n g. serenade of sirens
You always hoped they weren't for your house
.Always.
Days spend in gravel parks,
[or St. Joe Catholic ele., to those who called it for what it was.]
Those days you swung so hard
Trying to fly away [with] memories,
Some good, Some bad.
[or till you thought you would fall off the swing]

We lived our lives off of PB&J and sun sweet water straight from the hose
[.always tasted better that way.]

When dark crawled around
And the Walls of SJC, and colored gang sings
[Separating .life. and .d.e.a.t.h. in simple colors of .b/l/u/e. a n d .red.]
Were covered for another night's struggle
We carried our shoes
[if there were any to be had]
Walked on home
Some to parents and bowls of Ramen noodles and ravioli
[straight off the stove from the can]
Some walked, hoping they still had a home to go to.

The nights were cold
[The people were colder]
Money was tight
And parents often screamed
At each other,
[At us]
But it was home.



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On Friday August 8th, 2008, Elegant Kiss (317) writes:
It's still home.. Love you, babygirl.


On Sunday July 10th, 2005, Anth (1611) writes:
im in awe....


On Monday May 9th, 2005, sIo (884) writes:
once again, i think i need a respirator to find the air i've just lost and to find my lungs and breathe again. FLAWLESSLY perfect in so many painful ways.


On Thursday April 21st, 2005, Northstar (454) writes:
this is a ahunting echo of memories rich with melancholy---sadly beautiful


On Thursday April 21st, 2005, frozen (747) writes:
this is fabulous writing!


On Wednesday April 20th, 2005, K_Love (688) writes:
I'm glad this was requested, what a lovely and wonderfull piece... and far, far, from average. I loved every word. Beautiful as always


On Wednesday April 20th, 2005, blue (1742) writes:
:) "the people were colder" that line hit me rather hard (well), wonderful write for a wonderful little girl :P ~b


On Wednesday April 20th, 2005, blue (1742) writes:
chyu's for you both ♥♥


On Wednesday April 20th, 2005, Lord Kalgalath (229) writes:
Superb... calls forth old memories and forgotten dreams. Brought a tear to my eye dear. Thak you


On Tuesday April 19th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1243) writes:
touching..if only i had a childhood like that...*tear*


On Tuesday April 19th, 2005, Lab Rat (325) writes:
this was good... very good... bravo


On Tuesday April 19th, 2005, ElegantKiss (399) writes:
Eee, I'm so glad you posted this.. It reminds me of my childhood.. "We lived our lives off of PB&J and sunsweet water straight from the hose [.always tasted better that way.]"


On Tuesday April 19th, 2005, ElegantKiss (399) writes:
Jesus that hits home.. The water did taste better that way... I remember being 3 or 4 and my sisters making huge xmas lists full of barbie dolls and dollhouses and etc.etc..


On Tuesday April 19th, 2005, ElegantKiss (399) writes:
All I asked for was a PBandJ sandwhich.:) *faves. Thank you for this, dear. It warmed my heart and flooded my mind with memories. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Love you.



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