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Rainy Day Memories

Faint buzzers sound
Shaking me from distant dreamlands
7 A.M
Mo[u]rning
Pulse of rain,
Invading my senses,
Warm comfort
Of ominous grey,

Memories,
Come in a wash[ing] breeze
But a ghost to this mortal existance
Submerged a prisoner
In twistes sheets
Confines
Shackles of misery one can't seem to break
Leaden
As opposed the simple cotton sheets
That seem to strangle me

I think of that day
We danced in the rain
With such abandon
You sang show tunes
In the outpour[ing]of rain

I wonder
When I died...

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On Wednesday May 10th, 2006, Ainsof (1822) writes:

tender emotion: your words craddle me... and the end kicks me awake

On Sunday July 10th, 2005, anth (1611) writes:

im swept away, in every single one of your works i find it so easy to lose myself in your words, such is the way you write,and each with its theme never falters, those of which you express are dear to my heart

On Friday January 28th, 2005, An Expired Member (2) writes:

I love it. Left me speechless, especially the end. The end of poems are my favorite to get to to read.. Somehow it reminded me of a heartbeat, dunno if anyone else noticed.

On Sunday October 10th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

and the sky was all violets, wanna give the violet more violence. one above and one below...ignore me.

On Friday August 20th, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (229) writes:

wow... well done i like

On Sunday August 15th, 2004, sixsixnine (492) writes:

really felt this piece .. the ending is my favriot lines.. very cool poem! *669*

On Monday August 2nd, 2004, glasshouse (801) writes:

"Leaden As opposed the simple cotton sheets That seem to strangle me" I love this. This piece was so... perfectly woven. Beauty and longing intertwine into heavenly words. Love it. -Glass

On Monday August 2nd, 2004, NikesRain (1475) writes:

..all through this it was so picturesque. The quiet, the struggle, the memories and then the end is sad but not overbearingly so. NIcely done Kya

On Monday August 2nd, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:

reminds me of Jonas Renske, which is probably my favourite lyrist, I love it...

On Monday August 2nd, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:

Oh was amazing.. so vivid and atmospheric, and the line "Shackles of misery one can't seem to break" in reference to the sheets was heart breaking and brilliant.. the ending shook me to the core.. absolutely incredible work.

On Monday August 2nd, 2004, girlafraid (579) writes:

i was smiling until the last line, the mood suddenly turned so serious...excellent effect...

On Monday August 2nd, 2004, indefined (713) writes:

another exceptional peice kyza... the last lines are haunting me.

On Monday August 2nd, 2004, Rebirth (81) writes:

you are truly a wonderful writer, this piece is wonderful, the ending was kind of sad but it fit well. Great write.

On Monday August 2nd, 2004, anth (1611) writes:

this has a wonderful atmosphere to it,capturing many feelings,it starts and ends so well,great work

On Monday August 2nd, 2004, Zophiel (349) writes:

I thought the lead in was amazing and the word choice was phenomenal as it always is with your works.

On Monday August 2nd, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (607) writes:

Wow..I loved it, I especially love the ending..you can hear the pause as if someone was reading it to you with such emotion...

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