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of Mood Rings and a Childhood Memory (Lost)

You always liked mood rings.
I remembered that,
Looking through my jewelry the other day.
Gently slipping,
A cold metal circlet,
Upon my finger.
I dreamed.

Just a 50 cent trinket
Ment so much to us
You gave me this
When we were 7.

Unaware...

All the colors...
Turning,
Unfurling,
Believing,
Colors would tell our moods...

Cuz I loved you,
And you loved me...

And of course,
We would marry.
My best friend...
But a childhood memory now lost

10 years passed
And I find
Myself
Praying,
Aching,
To believe
This color
Will prove our love...
Once More....

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On Saturday August 25th, 2007, Simply Me (53) writes:

So sweet and sad at the same time. I'll remember this the next time I see a mood ring.

On Monday July 11th, 2005, Dysphoria (165) writes:

Wow..this just breaks my heart, the regret and sorrow in this are overwhelming, beautiful write. -Justina

On Sunday January 2nd, 2005, Cinn (187) writes:

This was so sad, but the emotions made this poem that much better. Great write. -Cinn

On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (575) writes:

this was too beautiful, the regret and the longing that genuinely pierces through my heart, nice work sweetness

On Wednesday July 21st, 2004, glasshouse (771) writes:

*cries* this was so painful. I have felt this very sting. You express it fluidly. Good write. -Glass

On Sunday July 18th, 2004, BleedSilver (372) writes:

who is he, and when can I kill him?~Mikey 'L'

On Sunday July 18th, 2004, BleedSilver (372) writes:

On a more serious note, this is a great write. The description is wonderful, but I still maintain I should kil him.

On Thursday July 8th, 2004, JiNx (142) writes:

Just got one the other day... Interesting.... Good memories too. Good write -Jinxie

On Thursday July 1st, 2004, An Expired Member (32) writes:

Oh yes, mood rings have definatly changed in my eyes as well. This is a wonderful peice. -Lauren

On Tuesday June 29th, 2004, suicideseason (2102) writes:

_this is heavy...the last stanza cut through me like a knife...i'll never see a mood ring in the same light again.

On Sunday June 27th, 2004, An Expired Member (73) writes:

this beautiful but at place i felt you didnt work as hard but thats me being a dog that im..beautiful write

On Sunday June 27th, 2004, DarkNTormented (17) writes:

this is beautiful it almost made me cry...*dark*

On Saturday June 26th, 2004, hate_doll (327) writes:

it made me look at my mood ring and smile and sigh...I really liked this...brava...

On Saturday June 26th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:

wow,this is painful and heartfelt very nice~ss

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