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Remember the rain...

Inky darkness
The intricate web of pain
Wreaking havoc
On unsuspecting souls
The stars will fall
As the blackest tears tonight
Like rain

-Pounding-

Blinding light
So dark
When angels fall
And the Goddess cries
Blood runs through you

-Pulsing-

Mourning doves
Gather round
Watching over those lost
Shedding tears
Feathers fall

-Drifting-

Away....

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On Thursday April 17th, 2008, An Expired Member (5) writes:

That was amazing. It really feels very professional. You have a great style!

On Tuesday May 22nd, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (443) writes:

beautiful

On Monday February 5th, 2007, The Spiral Downward (388) writes:

A 10! . . . I love the way you write

On Saturday December 30th, 2006, An Expired Member (4) writes:

i wish i had your talent..could you tell me what you think of my poems?...pls

On Saturday December 30th, 2006, An Expired Member (4) writes:

super

On Monday October 2nd, 2006, An Expired Member (25) writes:

This is gorgeous and unique. I'm a Seattle girl, so I worship the rain and definitely can identify with some of this...

On Monday March 20th, 2006, xserratedsoulx (276) writes:

mmmmm...delicious.. i'm a sucker for anything about stars and rain, and you got them both. good write. ~lauren~

On Saturday March 18th, 2006, heartdripsblack (766) writes:

cool poem i liked it

On Sunday June 26th, 2005, Aethelwyne (70) writes:

i love the rain

On Monday May 30th, 2005, An Expired Member (6) writes:

:D mmm you have a beautifal mind and you express it well, very cool poem~maistro~

On Thursday May 12th, 2005, An Expired Member (12) writes:

HOW CUTE>>>>

On Tuesday May 10th, 2005, Serenity (598) writes:

So beautiful!

On Monday April 25th, 2005, Redbudyz (4) writes:

kya never knew you were so good love it

On Monday April 18th, 2005, Angst Queen (470) writes:

beauty, pure beauty

On Sunday March 13th, 2005, blue (1749) writes:

Wow, your obscurity paints an intoxicating picture....so very well done raindear! ~b

On Thursday January 6th, 2005, Lord Kalgalath (229) writes:

excellent.

On Wednesday December 22nd, 2004, An Expired Member (16) writes:

consumes me...

On Tuesday October 19th, 2004, weheldhandsattheendoftheworld (120) writes:

this is so gorgeous. all the right pauses in all the right places. perfect flow from words to picture. wonderfully done!

On Wednesday July 21st, 2004, glasshouse (801) writes:

Beautiful painting here. Excellent. It feels like it could go on forever. You are wonderful with descriptive adjective. Good write. -Glass

On Saturday July 17th, 2004, Tracer (140) writes:

so wonderfully overlapping, the entire read was like being smothered by a blackness you could not escape, excellent write,

On Thursday July 15th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:

you have these ways of expressing things-a different side of the feeling. an emotional thesaurus to be cheesy about it. nice wording.

On Monday June 14th, 2004, Seraphic (290) writes:

That was...depressing, but beautiful :) nicely done *~seraph~*

On Friday May 28th, 2004, Graveyard_Desciple (49) writes:

very good. Love it. great flow and imagery. great write

On Thursday May 27th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:

Very powerful piece...Nice strong imagery that I could have lost myself in,though..I felt it ended too soon...Butterfly..xxx...

On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, Zophiel (349) writes:

stunning visuals to accompany the inherant emotion

On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

away... to release? "unsuspecting souls" ... brilliant vision, angle. dark, filled with delicate beauty...fallen. somewhat unique. enjoyed the vision.

On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, Midnight Shadow (90) writes:

Ahh...I perceive this to be about losing people you love and the heartbreak that comes with it. Beautiful! ~Midnight

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