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‘You move like a dancer’ he says. And I’m adrift, afloat; my mind is reeling upside down in the student center on a sofa listening to the diet coke sizzle. There’s a straw inside the coke, the bendy kind. There is a small pack of 50 in my bag because I like the way my cheekbones filter out when I drink with them. I’m prone to classy acts like that; little trends in frequency of relative bullshit which means nothing to have, to do.

Upside down, my hair moves against my arms and it itches. I want to scratch but yield in movement, not wanting to give him an excuse to talk again.

It’s easier to feel that I’m breathing in this position, skin taunt over my ribs. It feels as if it could rip if I press more, build more pressure from within my chest, but it doesn’t so I won’t. I’ve tried before, this sitting upside down.

‘You make me sound like a goddamned cliché.’ And he does, but he recoils, confused, thinking flattery would be a strategic way to enter my sordid self of conscious, but it’s not, so I rebuff like this. More pissed off than before. ‘You’re not a cliché.’ he thrusts back. Flips idly though his philosophy book, notebook ridding his high crossed leg and now my eyes are watering. The coke snaps in life on the table, little ricochets of violence against the coloured tin and I look at the straw. I tell him he doesn’t know everything.




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On Wednesday April 4th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1104) writes:
you got a lingo i can totlly get into. feels like your words wrap around my ear drums. i will have to read more of you for sure.


On Wednesday July 19th, 2006, An Expired Member (2) writes:
"little ricochets of violence against the coloured tin..." ah...I've missed that! This seems less....vulgar(?)....than previous words...but that could be time. C_W_E


On Monday March 20th, 2006, Jonas (877) writes:
a moment amplified into distorted waves that form the pattern of one of the many truths. writing that sucks me in and leaves me dazed. never disappointed.


On Monday February 13th, 2006, MindRape (863) writes:
uh uh uh! damnit i keep looking for more and its not here....i hate being brought to the edge of intensity only to fall away


On Thursday February 2nd, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (752) writes:
"little trends in frequency of relative bullshit"...easily define, yet repulse the definition...stitch together, but hide the seams...


On Thursday February 2nd, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (752) writes:
embrace my carefully crafted facade, oh ye proles, but do not look too closely at the "Made in China" marking on the back of my right thigh...


On Thursday February 2nd, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (752) writes:
I loved sipping this most recent product from your effervescent mind...it tickled my throat on the way down. Ciao, T/S


On Sunday January 29th, 2006, MindRape (863) writes:
damnit Sexy Lexy i swear bitch you get more edible as time passed and so does your writing. I'm curious to see more of this tease piece


On Monday January 23rd, 2006, Six-Out (1798) writes:
Way to leave me wanting more. Your word usuage, and the way you lay out your ideas. Mmm.



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