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The ocean is calling and your red phone is at your ear, imprinting the basic lines of the curved piece to your hazel sickbed flesh and I’m whispering goodnights stories into the crook of your mind, settling in the warmth of my own breath.

I miss the safety that was you. I miss lying side-by-side watching the summer winds blow at the strung photographs across the space of your small room. The way we laughed and talked and played our hands’ silhouettes in a dance of crossed fingertips against the stucco swirl wall.. and do you remember the way we sat crossed-legged and stoned faced smoking camel cigarettes into the reflecting mirror? Do you remember how we examined each other mercilessly?

Freckles and pimples and pin spotted lines across the bridge of your nose with hair too long, legs too white – and we laughed at our faults, stripping ourselves to the barest roots of our souls;

and maybe that’s why I’m telling you these stories.




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On Wednesday September 22nd, 2004, Marek (145) writes:
I remember how we danced... As always you capture details that make your poems real for those who read them.


On Saturday September 18th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:
if i could dive into the screen and swim in your words, i would buy floaties and still find myself drowning in this. beautiful piece...


On Thursday April 22nd, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:
magnificent. your imagery is pure and clear...the emotion so easy to relate to... this particular piece gave such a feeling of longing, and the last line gave perfect closure.


On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, crush_with_eyeliner (15) writes:
I must be honest, I've missed reading your life. It seems so familiar, yet so far away.crush.


On Tuesday April 20th, 2004, urbanhumility (1351) writes:
binding in the most honest of ways...... your innocent recollection, your words, making for beautiful prose.........urban


On Saturday April 17th, 2004, girlafraid (579) writes:
that was truly amazing...reminds me of someone as well...but a faraway place to which i can no longer return...thanks


On Saturday April 17th, 2004, Chameleon (120) writes:
Gazing in amazement at the girl in the sand...and even more at the power of her word...*hands her blue roses*...profligez, my forever inspiration.


On Saturday April 17th, 2004, Reverend (105) writes:
I've never been good at commenting. I just wanted you to know I loved the poem.


On Saturday April 10th, 2004, sulkylime (258) writes:
your rapidly wild flow of breathtaking words and phrases.. reading your work is almost like witnessing your stream of consciousness , inside a poetic sphere.. but we can allow ourselves to pause at the right moments because of a unique rhythm in the lines


On Saturday April 10th, 2004, sulkylime (258) writes:
.. as for this poem, this plunges me into some kind of reminiscence.. reminds me of a person.. i might as well make a phonecall


On Thursday April 8th, 2004, Cinn (188) writes:
i like this poem its so personal almost like a inside joke or something only much much more serious


On Thursday April 8th, 2004, capt_funguy (999) writes:
i don't know why i haven't stumbled across your writings before ... but glad i did ... the dissection process you conduct upon your own circumstance ... breathtaking to witness .. very cool ... funguy



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