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divine red

i'm feeling out of balance
circumstance has me in a trance

you know it's times like these
that we should dance & dwell in romance

take me all the way
making our short days
reasons to play

wake the dead
like my head
&
turn this water
divine red

now the adrenalin starts to spread
see the dead alive instead
& the rocks turning to sweet bread

i've only had a glance
of your inmence importance
without you i'm out of balance
my circumstance holds me in a trance
it's here we will have to fucking dance

i really know what i need
you've already begun to feed
this feeling no longer a seed
& i have no more blood to bleed

can you feel me?

***669***

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On Thursday October 7th, 2004, sixsixnine (563) writes:

i love you more & you know it! *669*

On Thursday October 7th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (497) writes:

NO WAY!!!

On Wednesday October 6th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (497) writes:

well after what u said i came to reverse my comment here. true enough i still stand by my words of love can be a horrid thing, but it can also be fullfilling and enchanting when u have someone like u 2 love :P ~sex~

On Thursday September 30th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

Man does not live by bread alone. Life's hard. Love's harder. When you write, you bleed life out of you. You water the (dying) roses too. Always look up. Never give up. ~Shane~

On Monday August 16th, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:

wow, this piece is like itstitle...simply divine. i loved it. great piece, matt. :) -MeL-

On Sunday August 15th, 2004, sixsixnine (563) writes:

thanx alot poets.. makes me feel good to read what you've said.. ~matt

On Sunday August 15th, 2004, restitution jones (35) writes:

i can feel you bro' , imbalance and the solution worth tryin'- you don't fuck around , gotta respect that - res

On Friday August 13th, 2004, Deadly Embrace (44) writes:

Definitely a favorite. The flow in this piece is wonderful. Great job 6 :) -DE

On Thursday August 12th, 2004, urbanhumility (1362) writes:

brilliant, lyrical, and felt......well done ..............urban

On Thursday August 12th, 2004, Instant Insanity (745) writes:

now the adrenalin starts to spread see the dead alive instead .. Absolutely Fucking Amazing, Great use of words

On Wednesday August 11th, 2004, manywalks (950) writes:

Yep, child, I feel ya. Good write, from the soul. ~ wen

On Tuesday August 10th, 2004, mysticventures (545) writes:

oh I can feel you alright! well said and very well thoughout - I love it !!!

On Tuesday August 10th, 2004, AHHH (241) writes:

awesome write

On Tuesday August 10th, 2004, Whisper (137) writes:

Nice write. Wish I could write like this. ~Whisper~

On Tuesday August 10th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (497) writes:

this was a sweet piece. love is such a horrid thing. i hate it and it hates me!!! ~sex~

On Tuesday August 10th, 2004, An Expired Member (35) writes:

I liked the ending. Kick ass dude.

On Tuesday August 10th, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (748) writes:

Yeah, I feel you - good one, beeyoch! Ciao, T/S

On Wednesday August 11th, 2004, sixsixnine (563) writes:

i love you tropical storm , but who you callin a bitch? <>>>lol!!!!!! *669*

On Tuesday August 10th, 2004, elisa (2017) writes:

you backlight the question 'can you feel me?' throughout the poem very well.great write!

On Monday August 9th, 2004, stormtalk (908) writes:

Proofread your goddam titles, people. Spellcheck. Dictionary. Or even just learn to spell.

On Monday August 9th, 2004, sixsixnine (563) writes:

thanx phabullshita what ever your fucking name is.. thanx ~669~

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