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don't worry
don't hurry
never matters what you take
the time is now to make
the unbrocken curse break

just make believe we can see
that we must fucking be free
fucking for eternity
make believe you've never been deceived

don't worry
come hurry
never matters what we do
try harder to break thru

stoned , thrown , blown , & , alone
tripping on this infinite zone
overdosed my soul roams
foams, thoughts i cannot control
it's breaking my fucking skull
& i've never felt so dull
as the pain takes its' toll
I
fucking let go
let it over flow
& like i said before
nothing will ever be slow

it's always dark when i wake up
all fucked & perfect
dead spirits to disect
where's the rain
that would change
this dry soul restraint?

some logical reasons ,
for why i'm feining
for this fucking feeling
pointless & demeaning
only keeps me dreaming
fucking hurry
fucking worry
this shit will get more blury




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On Sunday August 15th, 2004, restitution jones (35) writes:
i wish i wrote this , like the black box recordings of a man going down in flames - you got the gift - res


On Tuesday June 29th, 2004, capt_funguy (999) writes:
go - fuckin' - go ... dug the 90 mph frantic hellride .... especially the last stanza .. cool man ... funguy


On Tuesday June 22nd, 2004, urbanhumility (1351) writes:
brilliant, i truly felt this one, wise choice of words, folding upon eachother smoothly...........well done.......urban


On Tuesday June 22nd, 2004, Mute Serenade (216) writes:
it was so fast, i mean, it reads fast... it races your heart... and you push for the next line... to not know how safely the arrival at the end will be. Awesome write, hope you're back soon. Sue


On Sunday June 20th, 2004, Instant Insanity (754) writes:
NOOOO!!!!!! 669 is gone, COME BAck SOON!


On Friday June 18th, 2004, K_Love (691) writes:
Wow... this is awesome. Great job on this. Sorry about your job though.. hang in there. ~Kirsten~


On Friday June 18th, 2004, An Expired Member (38) writes:
I am sorry about your job, but keep writing things down definately because you have a great way of writing how you feel.


On Friday June 18th, 2004, sixsixnine (492) writes:
i lost my job so i wont be able to comment much anymore becouse i don't have a computer at home* but i will talk to all of you soon take care* 669 *


On Sunday June 20th, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:
i missed talking to u man..wondered where ur gone...hee hee, now i know. cant wait 2 read more of ya stuff & talk 2 ya again. miss ya! come back soon :) hugs, -MeL-



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