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me & you

hold on
fuck it
let go
don't you even know
what's in your soul
you only know
my dick is up your hole
it's sodomy & out of control

baby kiss me
while i fuck you
lick & suck me
cuz i love you
let's play rape me
& i'll tie you
blow me crazy
as i eat you

no more lame
fucking games
just soothing fucking pain
no more blame
or stupid shame
nothing the same simply difrent
me & you
**669**
3/28/2003

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On Tuesday November 14th, 2006, Mylissa (1083) writes:

Raw, I love it.

On Tuesday April 11th, 2006, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:

damn.. this IS twisted.. i like it..

On Sunday June 26th, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (86) writes:

twisted and hot and real! I like it!!---Steph

On Monday May 16th, 2005, peril_notion (123) writes:

Damn... you said it. I'll just leave it at that. Nicely done. ~Heather

On Wednesday August 18th, 2004, AHHH (243) writes:

damn... you're twisted...I like...

On Friday August 6th, 2004, restitution jones (35) writes:

guess you did a little time too , huh ? good work , good times - res

On Friday August 6th, 2004, An Expired Member (3) writes:

hmm... interesting...

On Wednesday June 9th, 2004, urbanhumility (1352) writes:

hmmm, i liked it, strong,but oh so real.......urban

On Sunday May 30th, 2004, sixsixnine (495) writes:

cry baby cry LOL! glad yall liked it *669*

On Thursday May 27th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

this was so beautiful i could cry....

On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, _untouchable_ (72) writes:

my mind is in such a shock right now i want to burst out laughing! This just sounded like so much fun...I remember when things were that fun for me.

On Friday May 14th, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:

haha...and i swear to come out with something sicker than this...!!! and really would like to thank you for your support on my works to. hugs**

On Friday May 14th, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:

very grossly sadistically cool... lol...i like... hahaha... who cares about it being over-direct rite? :)

On Thursday May 13th, 2004, evolve (2229) writes:

Haha...you are great...really direct, as Tracer said...you sound like you have a few bitches...**June**

On Wednesday May 12th, 2004, Tracer (140) writes:

That was rather direct, although not my kind of poem, as with anth, I guess for its type, nice write. Guess this was very straight-forward, sometimes that is needed...^vTracerv^

On Wednesday May 12th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (499) writes:

"blow me crazy as i eat you" lol now u are speaking my language. great write! ~sex~

On Wednesday May 12th, 2004, lollipoplips (110) writes:

i like it. what a ride.he-he.

On Wednesday May 12th, 2004, anth (1611) writes:

yeah not my kinda poem but i respect the immediateness that comes across in a way, and the flow was especially good

On Wednesday May 12th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:

nicly written but kinda disgusting. but its still a nice piece of writing.

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