DarkPoetry -|- sixsixnine -|- crumbling

crumbling

welcoming pain
once more my brain
has been drained
sameold fucked up shame
i've gone insane

see i have came
to be the one you blame
want to change this game
simply be your plain self again

it's like a sin
we've never been
something with in
makes me give in

so many lies
i cannot hide
don't want to try
can't even cry
time to die

it's ok
i'm still inside
the empty hive
honey poisonouse vibe
dangerously evil drive
so i commit suicide
my heart subsides
this end an unexplainable ride
leaving me beside
good reason for which i have died

you will confide
in the piece
of your mind
when it dies

***669***

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On Friday August 29th, 2008, LiP Stiches (60) writes:

love the beat and rhyme.... but I know what it is like to have a mind out of control and such sorts....good write.

On Monday August 16th, 2004, sixsixnine (495) writes:

this was inspired couple of years ago when i was trying really hard to find a moment that last forever.. what better thing than death i thought.. i didn't like me so this was a way of saying that ~ honestly sometimes i feel this all over ~ *669*

On Sunday August 1st, 2004, An Expired Member (5) writes:

ok so i'm not that dark anymore.. sry i gave up on wanting to kill myself last year..

On Tuesday June 29th, 2004, An Expired Member (30) writes:

flows so well... i like. a lot

On Sunday May 30th, 2004, An Expired Member (8) writes:

this is the best piece i've ever read. U ROCK!!!!!!!!!!

On Monday May 10th, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:

the rhyme of this piece is excellent. good flow & structure. great work.

On Monday May 10th, 2004, urbanhumility (1351) writes:

i dig this one, deep and concise.....urban

On Saturday May 8th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (499) writes:

loved it!! the rhyme here was very well written. that is what drew me in. good job!!!

On Saturday May 8th, 2004, PerfectAdvocate_Lives (23) writes:

I love the last stanza. This is excellent work. Every drop of it.

On Saturday May 8th, 2004, Midnight Shadow (90) writes:

Wow! Simply amazing. I like the last 4 lines. ~MS~

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