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iNvIsbLe DoOm

shrooms ago
it all felt so slow
now i feel it all
as one quick blow
so i fucking let go
this beginning cold as snow
after this shit i don't know*

think life's a loan
we pay off with moans
throwing stones
finding happiness in painform
under trees in mean storms
need to fucking end this norm!
born
torn
mourn
porn
thorns sworn to scourn
inside the woumb
making wounds
deeper gloom
evil fume
slaughter room
wicked noon
iNvIsbLe DoOm
&
i'm so lonely & bored
just gonna fucking ignore
that i'm frustrated &
so much more torn
i'm left on the floor
worse than before
tied by a whore
who's laughing at me as she
steps out the door
can't take anymore
now hate is my core
forever more
WHY!!!
can't hang my woes to drip dry
let the bullshit pass me by
fucking choose to let it slide
but the whores left me to die
&
I'm
burning
freezing
my feelings contradicting
breathing
screaming
my rising just keeps sinking
loving
hating
my life i spend debating
falling
stalling
no god hears me calling

i wish things just changed
be anything but the same
take away the pain
i've dealt with in vain

******6******6*********9

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On Monday November 20th, 2006, SaraJane (40) writes:

nice, this flowed very well

On Monday November 13th, 2006, Instant Insanity (745) writes:

Many Many Shrooms ago we used to talk alot. now youve disappeared for the 2nd time ][ ][

On Tuesday October 12th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:

the was like an open wound... amazing work!

On Thursday October 7th, 2004, sixsixnine (565) writes:

itsyill hurts & i know now that it wont ever stop... thanx

On Thursday October 7th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:

jes told me to have a look at you and i feel bad that i didn't before. your other works are just likly to improve from this point and this one itself impresses me

On Tuesday October 5th, 2004, capt_funguy (993) writes:

so completely alive ... barely contained by the skin ... last thing holding you together ... immacculate .." my rising keeps sinking ..." ... no fucking formulaic bullshit ... scream and break the glass ... funguy

On Tuesday September 14th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

nicely done in rhymes...good work

On Thursday August 5th, 2004, TheReap (42) writes:

Unique style - keep it up!

On Sunday August 1st, 2004, An Expired Member (5) writes:

yeah ok you beat me on the psychotic factor.. at least im not a druggie-psycho_panda

On Sunday August 1st, 2004, mysticventures (545) writes:

I heard your cries - and felt your pain

On Sunday May 30th, 2004, sixsixnine (565) writes:

thanx poet & anth it's been over a year since i've been here. thanx for the welcome* talk to you guys later *669*

On Tuesday May 11th, 2004, braindead_poet (581) writes:

such an empty, tortured, isolated feel to "this". it's damn good to have you back, 669.

On Friday May 7th, 2004, Anth (1611) writes:

i like your style, it shows promise of more great works to come, the way you form it with flow

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