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the wind is blowing
the air is dry and dust
lying on the table top is on my hands
gritty
and the brown tree crackles in the wind
leaves scattered in pieces in my hair
dust from the ground blowing
and the taste of sand in my mouth
and in my eyes nothing but open spaces
and I lying there not quite ready
to crumble up, shrivel and dry
to blow away on the wind
no, lying there battered
- and torn, abraded with life and dust
wishing I could see from any wound flow
just one drop of blood
to tell me if there's any life left to lose



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On Friday October 3rd, 2008, EmosAndRazorblades (5) writes:
whoa. That was beautifully written. loved it.


On Wednesday June 29th, 2005, SorrowSoul (73) writes:
Very impressive write.


On Monday December 20th, 2004, Valentine (508) writes:
Perfect. Just perfect. The imagery is astounding, the concept rotting and sadenning. A dream of a write.


On Friday October 1st, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:
nicely done. images come and images go, love it


On Thursday May 27th, 2004, whisperer (168) writes:
nice excellent imagry


On Friday May 14th, 2004, Death (30) writes:
i loved this poem. great write


On Friday May 14th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:
keep the substancial comments coming


On Sunday May 9th, 2004, Midnight Shadow (90) writes:
Perfect images created in my mind. Keep it up! ~MS~


On Tuesday May 4th, 2004, An Expired Member (13) writes:
very nicely done, good work, I loved the vision in this write~~~chance


On Monday May 3rd, 2004, -Oz- (174) writes:
wow i am truly amazed, great work right here, great set up of the scene, great discriptions, "and in my eyes nothing but open spaces" that is what really brought this together, BRAVO! ~>OZ<~


On Monday May 3rd, 2004, An Expired Member (7) writes:
wow- very strong good imagery great job-luv gee



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