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"Winter this year wouldn't be that cold (for Blood of Winter)" by aXe FactoR

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Like sizzling sparks ignited into dazzling fireworks
Though evanescent still leaves a feeling of warmth
Ever comforting, never discouraging
I know my stay here in DP isn't for nought.

To which days pass & seasons change
& time seem to disappear in dusky sunlight & smoke
One would never forget someone special
Who uses winter to pale the pelting sunlight,
tinting the mountain gold

Where to me, a world lit by computer screens instead of the sun doesn't matter anymore
As it is through here where i found release from harsh lines and countless chores
Through it all my concentration narrows down to a single thought
Which is to credit my Poet-hero for the endless smiles he has brought

& just like a conductor climaxing his piece to the crescendo
and feeling immense pride as he finishes it hearing an encore,
I lay awake with a feeling of contentment in my heart,
Knowing that winter this year wouldn't be that cold...









(Well Dan, this piece is specially written 4 u...Thanks loads 4 being one of the lights in my life, & 4 all the nice emails we exchanged. i thought its due time i credit u 4 ya kindness & friendship. My writing ain't great, but i hope u'll like it all the same :) )





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On Tuesday December 14th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:
awww so sweet and dedicated :) ~ss


On Monday September 20th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
I like your use of adjectives here, Mel! ~Shane~


On Monday September 20th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
From time to time, there are a couple people I've written tributes to here on DP myself, simply because what they say moves me more than what I say. The tributes are like this but they don't rhyme. It's nice to see these. ~Shane~


On Sunday August 1st, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:
Everytime someone has written something for me here I have taken in everyword and stitched them to my heart...now I have a new patch to wear with pride from this beautiful friend of mine...


On Sunday August 1st, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:
see, what you see here is a part of me that most don't and won't ever know...to most of my friends I am just Dan or Tebo, here I am Blood of Winter, and I am as much him as he is me...Thank You so much...


On Monday August 2nd, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:
:)


On Sunday August 1st, 2004, sixsixnine (496) writes:
i really feel this piece* great work! again .. blood of winter's very lucky to have you as friend & so am i....*669*



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