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Can you see the tears behind my smile?
Or feel the pain behind my strength?
Oh, so vulnerable behind my flimsy skin,
Tear off my mask & reveal me.

Would you care spend some time with me?
As long as the time i spend with you in my dreams?
I'll drift forever in the island of you & me
Never transient is the transparency of thy hidden emotions



Seek me thru'...seek me thru'...deep down i long for you


Trace the creases of my lips with your touch
I'll close my eyes to feel the searing heat of your skin upon mine
A moment where time freezes in space, i pray for eternity
to feel u like this, i swear an angel had descended upon me.


I'll give up forever just for a moment like this
Which heaven is just a step in front of me
& i just don't wanna go home right now
Lay me on your bed of roses, i wanna bath in the scent forever


Feel my heart'...it beats for you...it bleeds for you


All i wanna taste is a bit of your heaven
So won't you just hold me close to you?
Cos if you would do that, everything would seem so clear
That you want me after all, beyond the layers of my veil

I don't want the world to see me
I just want you to
Give me a little piece of you
Hug me tight, before i crumble


Oh so broken, i'm so broken, pick up the pieces...pick up my pieces...









(Dedicated to my soul, an endless terrain of depression)



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On Saturday September 18th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:
you have got to be kidding me.


On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, Solace (1425) writes:
"I dont want the world to see me, I just want you to" a vision of unrequited love, longing and frustration, oh so well known to many...but like as to a drug could you stop at just one taste???? I think not.


On Monday July 19th, 2004, sixsixnine (565) writes:
reveal me is brilliant! love your work mel it reminds me of my own self.. you keep tapping into such real feels*) never stop writing * you're very talented * 669 *


On Monday July 19th, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:
another revealing piece of your struggle...Oh and for a title if you just want my opinion : A Taste of Heaven : it's such a beautiful line in the piece Mel.


On Saturday July 24th, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:
think i'll just title it just that. :)


On Saturday July 17th, 2004, indefined (713) writes:
first off a wonderfully written peice, i liked the dedication too :) , i would have called this " layers of veil ", but whatever works for you :)


On Friday July 16th, 2004, BleedSilver (373) writes:
maybe 'pick up the pieces'? Ah, don't mind me. Just a suggestion.



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