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Love U so, So I let U go

(if you love a person, set him free, if he's meant to be yours, he would come back to you eventually)

One more hour before we embrace daybreak
Though I never want our time together to end
We sat side-by-side, along the beach
The sea frozen in silence, as of our conversation
I took one last glance at your face
Those eyes that I would still get lost within, I see them
The sparks that used to sizzle, now fizzled
& the cool breeze caressing our faces
Bringing away with it our past
Ashes to ashes dust to dust

Love U so, So I let U go
I wouldn't bear to hinder U
Go run, fly free
Chase your love
Chase your dreams

Love U so, So I let U go
To see you smiling again
To see you gain happiness
Would be my only consolation

I guess she's the perfect one for U
I'm not as gentle or mature
I guess I could make things easier
I would take a trip back through history
Revert us back to the days where we were just good friends
We could still meet & talk sometime, on amiable terms :)
U wouldn't have to feel so caught up now,
Being trapped in this endless love-triangle
A heart broken, is none compared to three
So I willingly step out of this
I wouldn't harbor hard feelings.

Love U so, So I let U go
I wouldn't bear to hinder U
Go, run, fly free
Chase your love
Chase your dreams

Love U so, So I let U go
To see you smiling again
To see you gain happiness
Would be my only consolation

You, embracing her in your arms
A wondrous & enticing sight
Even if I were to cry
It would most certainly be tears of happiness
Cos I believe fate brought us together once
In a world so vast, yet I still met you
A chance meeting, So I'm grateful
Even when this happiness is short-lived
It would still be happiness & no one could steal these memories
And even if we were not destined to be lovers
I'm still glad that we could be friends..
I really am

Love U so, So I let U go
I wouldn't bear to hinder U
Go, run, fly free
Chase your love
Chase your dreams

Love U so, So I let U go
To see you smiling again
To see you gain happiness
Would be my only consolation

No, there would be no bitter feelings
No, not at this time
To love & having to lose it
Is better than not loving at all
And though today,
I witnessed my heart's partial demise
I would still smile & carry on
I know that one-day,
This heart would be resurrected
As this heart has known how to love true

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On Thursday April 14th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (767) writes:

Very powerful poem. Very emotional and real. Love the flow... the write is amazing ~*~Tart~*~

On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (164) writes:

Wow, You captured a feeling I've had lately so well, it really hits down deep. Your writing describes the feelings behind them perfectly. I especially like this one for the advice that comes with it for me. Thanx

On Sunday June 27th, 2004, suicideseason (2145) writes:

_shit...very impressive,indeed.there's nothing i can say that hasn't already been said.sooooo powerful.thanx,Mel.

On Sunday June 27th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (499) writes:

awww...this is beautiful axe. im impressed...great write!!! ~sex~

On Saturday June 26th, 2004, glasshouse (803) writes:

This was painful and liberating. Beautiful and tragic. I like it alot. I really do. -Glass

On Thursday June 24th, 2004, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:

This is so gentle, yet so strong. I love the balance and maturity that comes through in this piece ;)

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, Rebirth (81) writes:

Emotions just welled throughout this whole piece. You've done some great writing here.

On Monday June 14th, 2004, OLd SouL (838) writes:

"Love U so, So I let U go I wouldn’t bear to hinder U Go…run, fly free… Chase your love Chase your dreams…" I think that repeating verse made this. A suggestion though is that I would full spell out every word. Instead of U, you. Other th

On Monday June 14th, 2004, OLd SouL (838) writes:

at... Brav-freakin'-O! :::OLd

On Saturday June 12th, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:

beautifully sad... i can relate to this very well... good job... ~Jen~

On Saturday June 12th, 2004, An Expired Member (16) writes:

so real and I loved it. great job.

On Saturday June 12th, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (607) writes:

So full of sadness..yet longing, the pain is so great, so real. You wrote this straight from your heart, and did a great job *hugz tight* ^_^

On Saturday June 12th, 2004, evolve (2221) writes:

Delicate and tenderly written...I'll remember this one for quite some time because of the emotions and memories it evoked in me. **June**

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