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I saw you
Oh yes, I did
Eyeballs rolling
Your shrieks
U gagged with the blood flowing from your mouth
U still looked beautiful
I loved you so much

You saw me
Oh yes, u did
Grinning at you with blood stained teeth
Waiting for a certain poisoned pill to take effect
You coughed, you smiled, tears in your eyes
I still looked beautiful
You loved me so much

No! I can't have you?!?!
No! u can't have me?!?!
No! we can't have each other..
No!not here o n this earth
But somewhere other than earth, there's a place for us... right???

I scampered beside you
Licked your bloody gash
Formed by my prized blade
Oooh it tasted so good
Made a similar slash
A slightly deeper one
So I could not see you pass off without me going first
No...I don't even want to bear this few seconds of emotional pain
I loved you too much

Merged our gapping wounds together
Made a promise of eternity
I'll see you soon.
We'll be together forever then
We lie side by side for now
Blood trickles as like our lives






Dying









Dying






























,
,
,
Dead.










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On Tuesday June 22nd, 2004, An Expired Member (3) writes:
wow,this is awesome,straight,that's the way people should talk to each other,no buulshit!


On Friday June 4th, 2004, Loserland (134) writes:
you are one fucked up girl..you know that? i like it


On Thursday June 3rd, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:
This made me chuckle, just so many people that it reminded me of...stupid humans.


On Thursday May 27th, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (603) writes:
romeo and juliet? seems like a 90's version


On Friday May 28th, 2004, aXe FactoR (426) writes:
lol... i would name them twisted RO & silly JU, twisted 4 RO 2 lick her slit wrist & silly JU for allowing herself 2 be killed!!! lol... :)


On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, gothemite (398) writes:
cool poem, i like the title too.. your style is different, but good.


On Monday May 24th, 2004, sixsixnine (569) writes:
HELL YEAH! I LOVE THIS! 669*


On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, K_Love (684) writes:
Imagine what love can do to all of us... hmm... great write anyways, I've never read a poem quite like this it's very original indeed. ~Kirsten~


On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, Midnight Shadow (89) writes:
So strong was your love...so much in love that you would die for each other. Wow...I am truly speechless. ~MS~


On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, Savannah (285) writes:
um...wow. wow.



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