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Summer, just another lovely day
Enjoying the warm sun beams glowing upon our faces
Hand in hand, I felt your racing heart beating again my palm on your chest
As u told me softly that I am yours…

Fingers entwined
Love stronger than wine
Until death do us part
Only you, my sweetheart…

Spring comes along in a flash
I remembered skipping joyfully to your doorsteps
No one’s at home, all’s quiet, silent…
Our bodies merged as we felt each other skin on skin…

Fingers entwined
Love stronger than wine
Until death do us part
Only you, my sweetheart…

Autumn comes faster than we can say goodbye to spring
Maple leaves flying around in the breeze
You spoke of a love so strong yet never gonna come true
I spoke of our love so great we could cling on to…

Fingers entwined
Love stronger than wine
Until death do us part
Only you, my sweetheart…

Winter this year was the harshest
As we struggled with our family to set us free
No one understands, except you and me
Pack the little we have in the dead of the night… we’ll take the car… leave…

Fingers entwined
Love stronger than wine
Until death do us part
Only you, my sweetheart…







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On Monday June 28th, 2004, Instant Insanity (745) writes:
wow , judging by the dates, you have been good for a while, u didnt just get better, Loving it .ds


On Tuesday June 1st, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (607) writes:
this might make a good song


On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, An Expired Member (27) writes:
I love this very much, i think that the repetition not only added the meaning to the poem, it showed the power that it beholds...Exellent, exellent job! OG


On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, Starfilled Starburst Starless (15) writes:
good job here. the repetition def added to the meaning of the poem. i like how you used the seasons to reflect the good and bad times that were had -star


On Sunday May 16th, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (748) writes:
I enjoyed this one very much - you have a very nice internal rhythm to your writing. Ciao, T/S


On Saturday May 15th, 2004, sixsixnine (563) writes:
Psuedo_me you rock so hard * that i'm hard* right now *669*



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