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These Are A Couple Of Poems I Started And Never Finished Cuz I Don't Know How They Should Keep Going... Sad Huh? If Anyone Has Any Suggestions DP Mail Me... I'd REALLY Apprieciate It...

1.: Sometimes I Feel Like I'm Gone...
FOREVER
Others I Couldn't Be
Closer To The Ground
Sometimes I Couldn't Be Without You
I'd Give Anything To Be With You For One Night
Then...
I'd Be Happy Forever

2.: Sometimes I Tell Myself What I Wrote About You Was Bullshit
But Then I Realize That I Was Lying To Myself All Along
I Wanted It To FEEL True...
But It Never Did...

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On Sunday April 17th, 2005, lonelygurl (5) writes:

i feel this poem to my core its excellent....good write

On Thursday December 9th, 2004, Valentine (508) writes:

Very well written, unique and distinguished.."I'd Give Anything To Be With You For One Night Then... I'd Be Happy Forever". I love this line with every breath . . every heart-beat. Beautiful.

On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, Whisper (137) writes:

Nice, I loved them. Why can't you finish them. ~Matt~

On Monday November 29th, 2004, frozen (746) writes:

Very well done.

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