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"An Extra Bullet, Just in Case." by so_skeevy

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The troubled whispers in the trees
An ice cold stare,
A stinging breeze.

That night they found
The damp crimson note
Tucked in the pocket
Of his favorite black coat.

I made that coat,
His mother said.
She covered her face,
And her hands turned it red.

She forgot to notice
Forgot to care
Just didn’t remember
Her son was there.

His once kindly face
was warped by a twisted grin
And his mother couldn’t help but wonder,
Where her son had been

And neatly scrawled with great care,
There was but a singe sentence there.
An unnoticed tear shone on the dead boys face.
"An extra bullet,
Just in case."




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On Sunday October 16th, 2005, coldheartedbiatch (14) writes:
excelent i love it so weird but still so great.


On Saturday April 23rd, 2005, Trichotillomaniac (49) writes:
Excellently done, there are certain rhymes that just make this all the more powerful..


On Friday April 22nd, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (553) writes:
sweeeeeeeeeeeeet!


On Wednesday April 20th, 2005, Raven (378) writes:
Ever so melancholy... with the power to make the reader just sit back and go "...oh."


On Wednesday April 20th, 2005, ONEANDLONELY (138) writes:
SAD,SAD,SAD...but good!


On Wednesday April 20th, 2005, AniDayz (1281) writes:
these words are crawling all across my skin...making me shiver...so emotion-provoking...the imagery in this-makes me picture a field of rolling desolation...this feel to this is epitemy of empty...described in full. dammmmm


On Wednesday April 20th, 2005, island warrior (303) writes:
Soul stirring stuff,top write.


On Tuesday April 19th, 2005, An Expired Member (24) writes:
That's soo amazing. i love it.


On Tuesday April 19th, 2005, An Expired Member (3) writes:
i absolutely love this poem. dearly. i love it. very memorable. excelent.



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