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The night is cold, it makes you wonder
Why you can’t keep up.
What if instead of rising you are pulled under,
What happens when you’ve had enough?
It’s too late for hope, too late for tears,
Tie the rope and understand,
It’s too late to make up for so many wasted years.
No, God doesn’t love you,
No one does
You’ll feel better when it’s through.
 The rope gets tight, Your breathing stops
You no longer have to fight.
You’re finally done,
But then your sister comes in and finds you
Your body is limp, your lips are blue
And through her tears you could almost hear her say

         ..........I love you.




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On Tuesday April 19th, 2005, An Expired Member (3) writes:
i love all of your work. you are a very very good writer. i can't just pick one favorite. they're all so great.


On Thursday April 14th, 2005, ElegantKiss (399) writes:
shit. This is the first thing I have ever read that on here that I wished I hadn't.. And dont take that the wrong way.. I just.. didn't want to feel this..


On Thursday April 14th, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (552) writes:
this is beautiful........ fuckin' A


On Thursday April 14th, 2005, AniDayz (1267) writes:
*reversal


On Thursday April 14th, 2005, AniDayz (1267) writes:
.shit. if this is true---or even if it is metaphorically true---


On Thursday April 14th, 2005, AniDayz (1267) writes:
-my heart goes out to you.NO tieing knots around your life-you can make it through-under the law of polarity---'the light will always attract the darkness',tho it works in reveral---the darkness will always attract the light...'


On Wednesday April 13th, 2005, suicideseason (2141) writes:
God...*sighs*...I'll have to come back to this sometime,but,in all honesty,I don't know if I can take reading it again...That is meant as a compliment...


On Wednesday April 13th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1243) writes:
oh wow...such power behind this piece..well done!


On Wednesday April 13th, 2005, Astra Dei (644) writes:
thats depressing... it happened almost exactly like that to a friend of mine.. *sigh*



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