DarkPoetry -|- so_skeevy -|- I wonder what it's like not to feel

I wonder what it's like not to feel

All the hurt and all the sorrow
All the wonder about tomorrow
All your pain and all your fear
They're all gone, your mind is clear

And you find as you take that final breath
That happiness is attained only in death
No one will ever understand
The relief you needed had to be planned

Dont feel bad; its not your fault
Its all the anger the world has wrought

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On Friday March 18th, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (546) writes:

I like the flow of this poem.....and when the weight of the world is on your shoulders the only thing to do is shrug

On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, OLd SouL (833) writes:

or maybe its your perception and your reactions... nevertheless... it was a good write. :::OLd

On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, DarkWolf (441) writes:

Very cool.. I like the wording. Peace in Death.. lovely. -Michael

On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, urbanhumility (1377) writes:

well done......urban

On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (227) writes:

???? ok. this appears to be a suicide type poem thing. nicely written and it flows well though

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