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Dear object of my misery,

Why? Thats all I know to say
Why do you hate me so
Why do you like to piss me off
I am this way because of you
Because you say I'm a piece of shit
because you tell me I'm an inconvenience
because I am a waste of your time
because you don't care
because you isolate me from everything
because you say I have no reason to have hope
and most of all
because you say life would be better without me
Well you are finally getting your wish
I am leaving your world
and everything that has to do with it
I will be gone forever
And you can finally have your way
You can fall asleep drunk every night
And smoke yourself to death
Just know that I had tried once upon a time
but you screwed that up to

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On Wednesday June 1st, 2005, An Expired Member (7) writes:

True that. I know that I've felt the same way but don't think I could put it so clearly. I really liked your work and I hope to read more.

On Sunday May 1st, 2005, DarkDruidess (195) writes:

ouch, the anger slammed me in the face almost physically...precisely worded for a great effect.

On Sunday November 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:

very deep. pure anger and feeling. hits way too close to home for comfort. very nice

On Wednesday April 30th, 2003, Twilight (2084) writes:

true raw emotion. nothing like it.:)

On Friday April 18th, 2003, SnowQueen (64) writes:

Great poem.. well written. Sounds like something I'd say to a family member.... sigh.. feel the love..

On Friday April 18th, 2003, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (203) writes:

I'm with ya there, it was written towards my step father as is all of my hatred

On Saturday April 12th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:

great poem! "You can fall asleep drunk every night/And smoke yourself to death" these 2 verses were the best to my view! the poem is sad but very well writen! the message is clear! ~laterz!

On Friday April 18th, 2003, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (203) writes:

thanx, i was worried about it for awhile there but i appreciate the comments:)

On Tuesday April 8th, 2003, An Expired Member (15) writes:

depressing poem, but i like it

On Monday March 24th, 2003, An Expired Member (13) writes:

great read, but falling asleep drunk is better than falling asleep alone.

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