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I run away,
Looking back over my shoulder.
Running away from my past,
So dark and haunting.
Then, I stop.

You reach out to steady me
As I look up into your eyes.
I apologize for running into you,
But suddenly your arms are enfolding me.

Then the shock wave hits,
Every horror of my life.
My knees buckle under the constant abuse,
Yet you keep me adrift.

I grow cold as my past tries to break me,
But the wall around me is strong and prevails.
Then...
My past is defeated.

The wall slowly starts to crumble,
My only protection gone,
And I fear what is on the other side.
All I see is you.

Your mysterious green eyes gazing at me.
I find myself lost in them,
And feel your arms still around me.
The sweep away all chill from before,
Warming the very depths of my soul.

For the first time,
I feel something strange inside.
Two words can describe this feeling,
Happiness...
And the other is completely foreign to me,
Love...

I smile this time as I look into your eyes.
Your lips capture mine in a kiss...
I awaken remembering,
The moment I fell in love...



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On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, DarkWolf (441) writes:
Another beautiful write.. I love the last two lines the most.. very beautiful.. -Michael


On Tuesday July 6th, 2004, SilencedAngel (60) writes:
This is just wonderful...I love it!


On Wednesday June 23rd, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (227) writes:
Very nice....i like this a lot


On Wednesday June 23rd, 2004, Savannah (285) writes:
gave me chills... very cool


On Tuesday June 22nd, 2004, Shadow Fox (23) writes:
As always, you did good.


On Monday June 21st, 2004, aXe FactoR (426) writes:
oh man...this is very sweet, esp the last stanza..i liked it a lot, amazing. -MeL-


On Friday June 18th, 2004, girlafraid (577) writes:
this is so beautiful...i'm glad you have found this feeling...wonderful work


On Friday June 18th, 2004, Midnight Shadow (89) writes:
I haven't...lol, I'm still looking for it. I have no idea where this poem came from. That scares me, lol. ~Tracy


On Thursday June 17th, 2004, Rebirth (81) writes:
The emotions in this piece are stifiling. You describe them so well, it's almost as if I'm looking at a picture that seeps emotion into my brain. great job on this.


On Thursday June 17th, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (603) writes:
You have a way with emotions that is just...its breath taking to say the least, as usual a very much enjoyed read ^_^ Thank you


On Thursday June 17th, 2004, nell (327) writes:
how can one help falling in love with someone who would stand there and break down our walls brick by brick, wicked piece;)


On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, Storm (184) writes:
This scares me. My only thought in the end was "But when he leaves he has ton down all your shields and left you naked, vonerable.." Love, if it is true has enough power to defeat almost everything... even the past. Beyond my fear: this was beautiful. Lov


On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, Midnight Shadow (89) writes:
Ah...yes, so true. But the question is...did he leave or is he still by my side? lol...one of the many mysteries I love my poetry to contain. Unfortunately, this is a poem of pure fiction on my part. So it is beauty with no reality...~Tracy


On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (821) writes:
This is beautiful not dumb!silly ms kya


On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (193) writes:
wow. love is a very powerful emotion. A_C


On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:
great job you express every emotion there is to



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