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I walk the roads endlessly,
My wrists and ankles in shackles.
I fall down, tired and weak.
*kick* Get up, you stupid, worthless bitch!
Bruised and beaten, I slowly climb to my feet.
You poke a spear in my side,
Reminding me of your presence.
I look up and see it ahead...
The city at which I'll be sold.
We arrive, I get shoved in a cage.
Crowds pass by, thousands of people staring,
Where is the face of hope now?
Moving now, I am placed to be bid upon.
I see him in the many faces,
His brown eyes gazing up at me with wonder.
We recognize each other right away,
Lovers from a past lifetime.
I hold out my hand to you,
Yet your touch is just out of reach.
The guards see me and laugh.
Then I feel a sharp pain in the back of my head.
My last words before I slump to the floor,
"Set me free my love..."
Darkness...
Did you make the final bid?



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On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, DarkWolf (441) writes:
Another killer work.. and again I am left wanting to know what happens.. excellent work.. not knowing can be mildy agonizing :) -Michael


On Wednesday June 30th, 2004, An Expired Member (8) writes:
its so good keep it up k kyas lil sis britt


On Friday June 18th, 2004, An Expired Member (10) writes:
amazing work....it reminds me of a book i recentlt finished Night of the Wolf by Alice Borchardt (A.K.A. Anne Rice's sister) in the book two main characters had a relationship very similar to this poem. really good write


On Monday June 7th, 2004, sixsixnine (569) writes:
earth beggins to shake* chains beggin to break Lovers from a past lifetime but we cannot touch * feeling so much from this piece beautifull & dazzling like my mother would say* 669 * fucking rocks!


On Sunday May 30th, 2004, batman nipples (2243) writes:
This is so creative...Bravo! *applauds*


On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (603) writes:
Oh my gawd! I love this so much! I had to pick up my chin, I love the way you left me hanging..was the bid made?? Wow, who knows? ^_^


On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, BleedSilver (372) writes:
Tracy...this is beautiful...lovers from a past lifetime...such a romantic yet unused topic, and you did well with it.~Mikey


On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (821) writes:
beautiful i liked it lots kya


On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, Daemonicus (636) writes:
phenomenal. an encounter of two from a past lifetime. between eyes - "i know you" and, the briefest flicker of "look where I am now" love's enernity, mortality's bind, the cycle of the soul, are all implied truths here. universal streams from these ever s


On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, Daemonicus (636) writes:
so simple words. i don't know what to say.. you've stumbled onto something quite amazing here. i did not expect what came from an (in its context) ordinary scene. totally cool.


On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, Midnight Shadow (89) writes:
Oh Wow! I got a comment from the great Demon! *hugs* Thanks! ~Tracy


On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, An Expired Member (27) writes:
WOW...This is so painful...Your words actually made me taste the sadness, and the resurected hope when you saw your love...These ups and downs...Beautiful,simply BEAUTIFUL.Love it: OG



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