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I see a young woman standing before me,
She could easily pass as my twin,
Yet I gaze at her, wondering...
She steps closer and I peer into her eyes.
I find what I'm looking for,
Right there underneath the surface.
The pain that hides behind laughter,
Bruises covered by perfectly pale skin,
And a frown that only reflects a smile.
She reaches up to catch a tear.
My hand goes up to my own cheek.
The tear glistens with a pureness,
Denying all the woman holds inside.
We mouth silent words to each other,
Each saying "You hurt so much,"
While the other shakes her head in denial.
I look into her scarred soul again.
I shudder, looking away.
So alike are we, that it is frightening.
We turn away at the same moment,
Like reflections of each other.
I walk away from the mirror...



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On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, DarkWolf (441) writes:
Sorrowful.. and very pain filled this one is. You have such an honesty with your works.. I am left amazed.. -Michael


On Wednesday June 23rd, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (227) writes:
I agree with June....by the gods woman, thou dost have talent. you put these dark feelings into such lovely words..i think anyone would understand what it is to feel that way after reading one of your poems...


On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, batman nipples (2246) writes:
This is another lovely write from such a pretty shadow...you've only just begun to touch the very tips of your potential.


On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:
i have shivers runnning up and down my spine...this is lvoely so sad i hate mirrors.~ss


On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, BleedSilver (372) writes:
I think this was a clever piece...Something I would write. Mirrors are quite interesting....They prove that you can see yourself the way you are, but you also notice your own shields or protections. ~Mikey


On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, ShadowFlight (138) writes:
Sometimes I wonder what keeps you held back... it seems like there was more that you had to say here... which is... intriguing :)


On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, sixsixnine (569) writes:
your works make for great songs * great piece* 669 * oh & ah check your mail*


On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, Anth (1571) writes:
this was so touching and clever,the best youve wrote i think, a brilliant poem, a lot of feeling nd the ending was excellent



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