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"Shotgun Smile Babydoll" by James_the_Saint

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You've been walking around for days and dragging that memory like a tail of distaste. but all those fantasies like sweet running white horses dance before your eyes and she never exsisted at all. With those arms outstreched like some damned beautiful saint the whore, all lies with that hair floating like an angel. You can walk away forever and she's still following you. You carry sandbags from your eyes. You inhale the smoke from a thousand years, your heart is healing and breaking everyday, simultaneously. She was so beautiful the trecherous muse, you can see the blood on your hands, she gave you her last shotgun smile.



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On Sunday February 25th, 2007, Tania (296) writes:
'she gave you her last shotgun smile' that lingers.. seriously.. i wish you had more stuff for me to read.ill say it again.. divine.


On Saturday February 24th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1101) writes:
"You carry sandbags from your eyes." Like a knife in a silken sheath, to borrow upon a quote; a cliché. This is stunning. Well done!


On Thursday February 15th, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (749) writes:
Smile, set, BOOM! Love it! Ciao, T/S


On Monday February 5th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1104) writes:
you have a style i totally dig, got to read more of you for sure!


On Thursday January 4th, 2007, Collective Amnesia (234) writes:
you have excellent aim with your words. good job ~Tamara


On Thursday January 4th, 2007, Freebird (624) writes:
Wow, that was great! I loved this.


On Thursday January 4th, 2007, dying angel (1307) writes:
*shivers* that ending was superb. a bit haunting.


On Thursday January 4th, 2007, elisa (1990) writes:
pow....nice shot:)


On Thursday January 4th, 2007, heartdripsblack (777) writes:
this was simply perfect :) i loved it. ~ red.



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