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I love you so much I'm bleeding from the outside in


I've forced all my love, (I actually have)
Onto some spirit force.
Somewhere it's pummelling through the night
Piercing the sky with neon pink stripes
And striking green eyes.
It's hurling to earth at the speed of light and
It dissolves into the atmosphere
Striking many people all over the world.

Pelting them without warning
And it hurts me becuase it rips it's self from my heart.
The very root, the source.

And that's why I'm such a bitch all the time.



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On Monday July 10th, 2006, Alanarchy (1697) writes:
Like Film noir with a penchant for chaos. This one held me from the first line, and left me smiling at the last. Nice work. Write on.


On Monday July 3rd, 2006, An Expired Member (37) writes:
i love how you worked such poetic words into such a blunt and honest statement. just blows my mind.


On Monday July 3rd, 2006, batman nipples (2246) writes:
"Somewhere it's pummelling through the night Piercing the sky with neon pink stripes And striking green eyes." ...


On Monday July 3rd, 2006, batman nipples (2246) writes:
It's so very rare to find words that are so vividly artistic, and at the same time, straightforward. You continually floor me in this manner. Much respect. You're a jewel.



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