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More Fantasies

Let me chew on nittygritty
little pieces/sand.

She had been gone so long,
I almost forgot she'd been alive at all.

Feed me, (oh his body is falling apart,)
(But he doesn't know that's why I want him,)

Would it be ok for me to-
Suck the life out with my kiss.

I want to suck your bones.

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On Tuesday January 31st, 2006, BloodySparrow (63) writes:

it show so many primal instincts that are often put off by emo people and goth the like, it nice

On Saturday January 14th, 2006, Johny_D_Lewis (603) writes:

it would be fine by me

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, batman nipples (2246) writes:

In between your lines are whispers over tingling flesh as orgasms. Simply complex & bound-erotic. Lovely.

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, BeautifulCalamity (575) writes:

sexy piece. fuckin lovely poetry.

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, dying angel (1307) writes:

i agree with elisa "i want to suck your bones" it has a kind of vampirish sexy sound to it.

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, elisa (1990) writes:

'......i want to suck your bones....'.......that has such a sexy sound to it....very nice

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, Guillotine (223) writes:

wonderful... exposing the hunger and malice so often shunned in todays society..., short but suffocating

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, Guillotine (223) writes:

not just hunger and malice but desperation and love

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1121) writes:

my goodness, this was such a strong write..i feel like you sucked the marrow from my bones. beautiful job.

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