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i dream of suicide

Neatly place the knife into my chest to end all my woes
Now gently twist the blade so the wound won’t close
Damn this hurts like that of a thousand deadly blows
I feel my strength leaving me as my blood steadily flows
I push it in a little deeper just to see how far it goes
And think about how my death will delight all my foes
Suddenly I’m awakened by the sound of soulless crows
To continue this hollow life filled with deep sorrows
The reason I dream of suicide only my demon knows

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On Wednesday September 27th, 2006, mywristshurt (510) writes:

awesome awesome awesome awesome.. i fucking loved it

On Wednesday September 28th, 2005, An Expired Member (8) writes:

written so well, i like the flow, and the imagry.can relate to topic...

On Monday March 7th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1221) writes:

i know how that can be....nice write.

On Wednesday October 13th, 2004, urbanhumility (1374) writes:

an internal wish.....manifested with beautiful words........well done..........urban

On Sunday June 20th, 2004, An Expired Member (15) writes:

i liked it a lot... its something that everybody feels, but most don't admit to.

On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, Twilight (2084) writes:

many dream of suicide. few know the depth of the impact that that act can have on other people.im glad your still here.

On Saturday May 10th, 2003, An Expired Member (4) writes:

Captured the sentiments of suicide perfectly. Dark but beautiful. ~Christen~

On Sunday April 20th, 2003, An Expired Member (25) writes:

Great write!! I loved it.

On Tuesday April 15th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:

good! keep the poems comming..!

On Tuesday April 15th, 2003, An Expired Member (94) writes:

fuck!loved it!

On Tuesday April 15th, 2003, An Expired Member (6) writes:

Nice and short that explains suicide very well.

On Tuesday April 15th, 2003, alone (198) writes:

thats very dark and very deep yet very thrilling and astounding work keep it up

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