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Confused

Tears roll down my cheek falling to a blood soaked grown
Noisily they hit but my ears hear not a sound
I stare in all directions to see whom I can see
But soon I realize the only one here is me
So I sink deeper into my self becoming meditated
My state of consciousness in this form is often debated
I sit and wonder am I crazy or am I just insane
Or am I hurting or am I just in a lot of pain
If I should be murdered or should I be slain
Is this a down pour or just some falling rain
I wonder if I can hold on or just maintain
Damn am I hallucinating or just seeing things again
Well is this the conclusion or maybe just the end

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On Wednesday April 4th, 2007, Enigma (124) writes:

that was good...very very good...two thumbs up..

On Sunday September 18th, 2005, An Expired Member (56) writes:

Personally, i like it.. Better than what I write.. I'd like to read some more

On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, Twilight (2097) writes:

you can rhyme like a mofo!lol. very well done yet again my friend.

On Tuesday May 6th, 2003, IceDragoness (250) writes:

definately has a cool flow to it, I've been here before wayyy too many times. Great write and good night ~Dawn

On Monday May 5th, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (333) writes:

Wow... this is incredible. I love this. Keep up the good work!!!

On Sunday April 20th, 2003, An Expired Member (25) writes:

You captured the feeling perfectly in a great piece of writing!! Beauifully written dude!!

On Tuesday April 15th, 2003, An Expired Member (94) writes:

this piece rocked my mind! greatwork.

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