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Divided

I am consumed by darkness yet I worship the light
For it was not my choice to be on this side of the fight
The darkness is full of pain and pressure on my brain
But my lust for the light is causing me such great strain
My heart has been blackened by my souls damnation
But I look at the light and it offers emancipation
My corruption runs so deep that is has become part of me
and the demons in side me blur my vision so i cant see
I am a warrior of darkness yet the light guides my way
So I respect it and do not take many lives during the day
And with all that said and done I have nothing else to say

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On Wednesday January 2nd, 2008, Lawless Fighter (45) writes:

I like the freshness of the rhyme scheme, not a whole lot of poems can pull off that many syllables between rhyming words. . .as far as demons inside. . i have much to relate to there . . .very nice write

On Monday November 1st, 2004, sIo (845) writes:

so true to the hope are the warriors of doubt.

On Wednesday March 3rd, 2004, BoldSolitude (275) writes:

I liked the line "For it was not my choice to be on this side of the fight" Itotally relate.

On Thursday January 1st, 2004, An Expired Member (20) writes:

There wasn't any great imagery or symbols (that I saw) in this one. Also lacked punctuation and the rhyming seemed forced. There are good thoughts here and I like the parodoxes, just need some better wording in places.

On Wednesday June 4th, 2003, Twilight (2084) writes:

i really like this one also. all of your work is equally genious! very good.

On Tuesday May 6th, 2003, alone (198) writes:

AH I really like this one...i appreaciate a good write.

On Friday April 4th, 2003, An Expired Member (94) writes:

man i really enjoy reading your work...write on!

On Monday March 3rd, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

ahhh... good vs. evil... the battle continues!

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