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Eternal flames engulf my veins causing immense pain
My body tries to maintain but It’s far to much strain
I cry tears of blood ever so thick again and again
That’s why I sit and wish for death he is my only friend
Why must I bare the weight of men who have no cares
They do what they want when they want with no fears
People live their senseless lives not caring who they hurt
Living meaningless lives until they lay beneath the dirt
Even though they are dead and gone their cruelty lives
Because the flames that engulf our hearts seldom forgives
The hatred and detestation always makes the flames grow
But we who bare the hottest flames never let the pain show




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On Wednesday April 4th, 2007, Enigma (123) writes:
Awsome write...I loved it....


On Friday August 6th, 2004, GirlintheBox (50) writes:
love it *krystal*


On Saturday May 8th, 2004, sixsixnine (580) writes:
fuck fuck fuck fuckfuck yeahhh!!!!!!! i love this piece great write *669*


On Saturday May 8th, 2004, Six-Out (1798) writes:
Fuckity fuck?


On Wednesday September 24th, 2003, SilentStalker (1318) writes:
Had to check your work, and glad I did, it's great. I'll be around a while...


On Friday September 19th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:
*claps* that ending kicked ass.. good poem.. Monkey


On Monday September 8th, 2003, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:
you've said here something of always wanted to say but just haven't gotten around to it...I guess i can relate too...+Fallen One+


On Monday September 8th, 2003, Trichotillomaniac (49) writes:
It's dark and deep, your writing is definetly unique, it doesn't hold that cliché darkness that some poems do..I loved it..


On Friday August 22nd, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (763) writes:
Wow...I love you style...and your wording..."we who bare the hottest flames never let the pain show" That's an amazing line.


On Sunday June 15th, 2003, SeekingNirvana (34) writes:
you have a very unique style indeed. great write! keep writing!


On Wednesday June 4th, 2003, Twilight (2084) writes:
you never cease to amaze me that this kind of immense talent exists. very good stuff you have here. keep it up.


On Saturday May 24th, 2003, wilted (306) writes:
i like the rhyming patterns...very unique. this is one work i can really relate to. good job on that. _k


On Thursday May 15th, 2003, GothicBlack (266) writes:
A prayer only speaking the truth not bullshit lies like most. brilliant and wondrous. ~gothic~


On Wednesday May 14th, 2003, alone (198) writes:
Simple, and beautiful, the words flowed so well...i love it again!


On Monday September 8th, 2003, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:
just because it's not an extremely lengthed write doesn't mean it's simple...sometimes fewer words tell a more complex story than a picture does with its thousands of words+Fallen One+


On Tuesday September 16th, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:
I'm with fallen


On Wednesday May 14th, 2003, An Expired Member (83) writes:
Amen... it sounds like a prayer...a very nice and dark prayer mind you yet still a prayer....



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