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I can feel my brain pleading
With my lungs to start breathing
With my heart to start beating
With my soul to stop yearning
With my eyes to stop burning
With my blood to start flowing
With my emotions to start showing
With my spirit to start glowing
But still I sit here not knowing
What it really wants or needs
So my life slowly concedes
To the hollowness of Death

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On Thursday May 10th, 2007, thelostmessenger (191) writes:

it screams of emotion... it's very flowing and interesting to read

On Wednesday April 4th, 2007, Enigma (123) writes:

I agree with all the comments others have posted....Great write.

On Tuesday May 31st, 2005, InsipidTouch (40) writes:

That is completely amazing... I love it.

On Sunday February 29th, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (194) writes:

great write, i love fast paced works good job ~Emptyness~

On Monday September 1st, 2003, Bast (895) writes:

this makes me manic... i fel anxious reading it. breathes fast before the end. interesting...

On Friday August 22nd, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (763) writes:

That flowed so nicely. And I don't know about anyone else but it sped up the farther I went and then just a sudden stop. I really do like you style.

On Wednesday June 4th, 2003, Twilight (2084) writes:

i cant help but agree. and if i had a favorites...you would definately be on it. no doubt in my mind.

On Saturday May 24th, 2003, wilted (306) writes:

very descriptive...i enjoyed this poem thoroughly. _k

On Tuesday May 13th, 2003, alone (198) writes:

Like all of your works before, its absolutly amazing, I have told you once and I will tell you again you are my favorite!

On Tuesday May 13th, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (70) writes:

thanks alone your comments are always appreciated, thanks you very much

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