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I stand alone now a broken man a broken soul
Looking for something in this life to make me whole
Loneliness is my true friend this I do know
Because in my hardest times it still wont go
I’m looking, searching for the one thing to guide me
But I’m still cloaked in darkness I trust it to hide me
I desperately need an answer but I’m scared that I will find
Something even more confusing that should have stayed behind
But yet I still search for this piece that very important sign
The more I search and look I lose more of what is mine
Still I concentrate hard letting my thoughts intertwine
But in the end I’m still confused and tangled like a vine





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On Friday October 19th, 2007, Distorted_Reality (131) writes:
your style of writing is amazing =0


On Saturday April 29th, 2006, mywristshurt (510) writes:
awesome, beautiful piece.. this poem reminds me of one of my own.. fantastic write.


On Thursday September 9th, 2004, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:
Nice flow... Left my head spinning.


On Friday May 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (21) writes:
Story of my life. If your interested, I would be glad to compare notes. Cut your losses my fiend and keep looking, you'll trip over it when you least expect it. Good luck and good work. Brother of loss, theemptyman


On Monday December 1st, 2003, Twilight (2084) writes:
ah yes...confusion. gods little torture chamber of an emotion. man ihate it. very well put.


On Friday September 26th, 2003, SilentStalker (1318) writes:
That's cool...you capture the feeling well...I like this...


On Friday August 22nd, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (763) writes:
ha ha...amazing how confusing it gets searching for something and we don't even know what we're searching for. Man do I feel this one. Very nice.


On Thursday June 26th, 2003, braindead_poet (577) writes:
nice captivity of an ever-present feeling. Always digging, but never sure for what, yet certain that it's there.


On Friday May 9th, 2003, alone (198) writes:
Absolutly amazing, ...we shall never know what it is we are really searching for...keep up the good work!


On Thursday May 8th, 2003, An Expired Member (34) writes:
Wow, this is really strong and I love it!... wow.


On Thursday May 8th, 2003, IceDragoness (250) writes:
i completely agree, loneliness- the ultimate greatness? or evil? I'll never know.. but while I think on that, This made me think (which is a Good thing) and has a nice flow to it, well done ~Dawn



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