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Her

She tortures my soul with the lust in her eyes

And every man’s goal is to be with her so hard he tries

Just to hear her voice many men would give their lives

So in dying they still lose for their goal is never realized

Many men have died for her but she still does not care

Because her heart is stone so she cant shed a single tear

She lives everyday wishing for her life to come to an end

Because she has many lovers but what she wants is a friend

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On Tuesday February 12th, 2008, xserratedsoulx (284) writes:

i empathize. more true and sad than anything else.

On Wednesday April 4th, 2007, Enigma (127) writes:

THIS IS ANOTHER GOOD WRITE...

On Thursday March 15th, 2007, An Expired Member (14) writes:

its sad, but i know people who are similer. great write, you really captured it without going overboard.

On Wednesday February 28th, 2007, prettydisgrace (144) writes:

this is a great write, very touching

On Thursday April 27th, 2006, An Expired Member (8) writes:

im in love with this! nice write ~*raven*~

On Wednesday August 3rd, 2005, Sticky Kitty (329) writes:

i agree, this was honest with a slap in the face at end. -kitty

On Wednesday July 13th, 2005, Butterfly (123) writes:

Wow this poem just kind of tears at your heart a little bit now doesn't it. So sad. Loved it.

On Monday May 2nd, 2005, An Expired Member (4) writes:

So brutally honest, yet still symphathetic towards the empty shell of a soul. bravo

On Sunday March 20th, 2005, An Expired Member (42) writes:

awesome, and so god damn true!

On Sunday September 5th, 2004, CorruptedLittleGirl (348) writes:

After reading this again, I feel I must comment again and tell you how incredible this poem is. So true. You are amazing.

On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:

Oh, yes...This is great. The flow is perfect, the topic is interesting and the revelation at the end was the icing on the cake. Nice ~Faerie~

On Saturday June 5th, 2004, Beautiful Scars (247) writes:

Damn, this is painfully true for some. exellent write. ..::Rage::...

On Monday May 31st, 2004, An Expired Member (38) writes:

wow, if I don't know better, I'd think you were writing about me (dont mean to sound conceited, its just, so many live their life that way)

On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (554) writes:

this sent shivers uop and down my spine ...this is sad i know the feeling of longing~ss

On Tuesday February 3rd, 2004, Cwn Annwn (108) writes:

Nice write...I love this write! It's so true and amazing!~GoNe~

On Friday September 26th, 2003, SilentStalker (1328) writes:

I see this happen everyday...we men never get the hint right away...do we...

On Thursday August 14th, 2003, An Expired Member (51) writes:

wow....-speechless-

On Thursday July 10th, 2003, Twilight (2114) writes:

this is amazing...it is so emotionally correct. tells what everyone wishes they could say...beautiful

On Monday December 1st, 2003, Twilight (2114) writes:

after reading this again i am adding it to my favorites:)

On Wednesday May 21st, 2003, hate_doll (331) writes:

beautiful, touching peace. isn't what everyone's looking for? Just a friend...? great work...(!)

On Monday May 5th, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (348) writes:

Wow, this is a truly amazing piece. You are one of my favorite poets on this site. You have talent!

On Wednesday April 30th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

O... my... god. It's like ... you just... i think... You read my mind, saw inside me, wrote what i couldn't bear.

On Wednesday April 30th, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (70) writes:

thanks for the comments, im glad i could write what you couldnt bear liquid thanks for your comment it's greatly appreciated

On Friday May 2nd, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

no darling, YOU are greatly appreciated:)

On Monday April 28th, 2003, An Expired Member (94) writes:

Fucking Awesome! another great piece!

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