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[x]pacing in a[white light][x]

minds racing

can you feel the imagery

on your neck?

my breath...

holding silent

its so uncomfortable

lying next to you

not holding you clos[er]

even though i can feel your heartbeat

[beating]in my skull...

asphixiation.antidote.

we stood outside kissing

even though it was just so cold.

and you kissed me.

taste of metal filled my mouth.

taste of death

your poisonous seed

released within me.

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On Wednesday March 30th, 2005, TropicalSnowstorm (693) writes:

"feel the imagery on your neck" - very cool and creative notion. Nice piece! Ciao, T/S

On Wednesday March 23rd, 2005, An Expired Member (4) writes:

do you AJ Davis?

On Tuesday March 22nd, 2005, An Expired Member (4) writes:

e-mail me please at destiny_carper1000@ yahoo.com

On Wednesday March 23rd, 2005, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:

may I ask why?

On Tuesday March 22nd, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1248) writes:

wow..

On Tuesday March 22nd, 2005, kisserott_death (50) writes:

Wow alley this is amazing, I really like this, -adds to faves-

On Tuesday March 22nd, 2005, Solace (1424) writes:

Asphyxiation not asphixiation...other than that this was interesting in a strange symbolic way...

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