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"[x]I can feel it [you're hollow too][x]" by murder_in_clubland

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Your eyes bore into me

like a tattoo feasting upon broken flesh

soaking up your pigment

As our souls begin to mesh

heartbroken,lifes taken

somethings wrong...

everyones gone...

and Im alone

Never felt so alone.

you stabbed me once before

Why cant you stab me again?

slash me with a needle.

[I have lost my head]

My mind is racing,pacing,tracing

your body has fallen so numb

but this is something i cant deal with

I think I might have died

But once again I become hollow

another emotion

to let go of...

and let go of again

Yet I can feel your hollow...

you wont admit it yet.

I thought you knew yourself

better than I did

but I guess Iwas wrong again

i know you better than you think

because i know your hollow..

hollow just like me!








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On Tuesday March 15th, 2005, AniDayz (1267) writes:
hrmmm...intensity again...such well placed and vocalized emotion...you fucking have talent, a powerful way in which you get the emotion across so fucking wonderfully.


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, kisserott_death (50) writes:
i'm not hollow, i can't be hollow when i'm around you, i want to make you full, i want to make you fell again


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, indefined (713) writes:
nice write indeed. i have often tried to explore hollowness, and this put's yet more light into that voidal darkness. cool.


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, Alec Pure (333) writes:
wow this was really strong and honest i loved it ~~GAP~~


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1241) writes:
"i know you better than you think" great line, becuz I can relate to it, i knew my ex better then anyone on the planet, including himself..but time changes people..



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