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Hidden Penitentiary

I'm shaking uncontrolably
With hopes of living again
Dead,
I sink slowly to the bottom
This black abyss of emotion
Holds my secrets
Dive in
Drown with me
The moment you hit my icy waters
You'll lose your breath
Panicing,
You'll try to swim back up
To the surface
Where you felt safe
But it's too late
You missed all of the signs
None of my prisoners live.

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On Wednesday May 31st, 2006, The Fool (969) writes:

Jumping into the sea? to drown but panicking to come back up, but the water just took control and forced it back into it's endless belly, this was a great write ~nightly

On Wednesday May 31st, 2006, The Fool (969) writes:

This just stole me, I started to read but I left shaking on the shore watching someone drown, the water engulfing and stealing his body. It sounded threatening and held an air to it that was just incredible

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