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"Thoughts after waking from a cold, dead sleep" by Lifeless

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I have a twisted sickness
For one there is no cure
You better pull that trigger
It could just save this world


© 2004 Lifeless

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On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, girlafraid (577) writes:
ominous...that is a good word...i love short pieces that say so much...cool work.


On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, Northstar (453) writes:
succinct poignant work here--very nicely done


On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, Syn (82) writes:
I like...nice to see you writing again. If I would change one thing, I would take out the "just" seems it my flow a bit better, but thats just me. Short, to the point, and full of emotion. -Syn


On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, suicideseason (2102) writes:
_heavy piece...cold...very ominous.i like it.



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